I have read the story like 6 times and still love it so so much

love the whole story so much! It's a complete package of action and romance combined with splendid writing style and characterization. you really are a talented writer!

Absolutely amazing!

Blood is blue newly formed bloodcells are blue before they reach the lungs where they get oxygen and take it to the rest of the body
this just really got to me because blood is initially blue in the body before it fuses with the oxygen that's why veins are blue and arteries are red
sorry i have a biology degree and things like that really... i just have to say something about them
but the story is good so far
it's a good read

I loved it! I love your stories! I can't understand how you can come up with so many different ones:P

Ok this story just oooozed cuteness.

Like seriously. I might need to call Ghost Busters for fear that the cute ooze isn't going to turn into some suburb eating monster.

Though if it did, I think it'd be a two headed monster. One head of a bunny and one of a kitty (like Hello Kitty). Either that or that Aeropostal monkey that used to be so popular (I swear it was the perfect cartoon character to take over the world. It had creepy beedy little eyes...and always smiled...

Sorry random rant.

Great story, loved the plot. Glad Creeper finally not a problem anymore.

Also loved knowing the marina of Chicago as you described Museum Campus (Field Museum, Adler Planetarium, and Shedd Aquarium). I was just down there last Sat, went and saw Sue (biggest, most complete trex in the world) at the Field with my brother. (We live in Chitown). I love hearing about Chicago in stories, movies and tv. It's like, oh look I've been there!

Sorry this is a weird review. Which I'm actually known for.

I really did like this story and I look forward to reading more of your stuff!

Amazing story. You have a very engaging writing style. Thank you for sharing this great story.

GREAT story. I loved every word of this one and read it in one hit.

Just brilliant.

This was probably the most intricate case that I've ever read about, and I could definitely see it happening over a two-episode stretch in the show. Very well written, very detail-oriented, and, God, very heartbreaking. But it was a great story, and I loved how easily the romance seemed to fit with (as opposed to working around) the case.

Thanks for posting!

xx RavenclawGenius

OMG. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY. This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read. I think you captured all of the characters very well. And the story was compelling and kept me reading. I loved the suspense you brought to this story. This was great. I LOVED IT.

The more I read your stories the less words I find to leave a significant review. But still I think it's nice to leave a comment after reading and enjoying so much (I had a few for mine and treasured them immensely:))

I really loved following the way you unravelled the plot alternating light and darkness, the way you reveal the characters and the attention to the details.

The choice of words is so careful - I read and I broaden my knowledge of the language (I am Italian) and I am truly grateful for that :).

You are so talented! Thank you for sharing your amazing work!

I very much like the idea of including the ‘never wake up alone’ into their vows. The paper bird that she made to him is somehow related to your avatar? Because that is the image that came to my mind as soon as I read it :) It is evident all the love and effort you put into writing this story, all the details and facts and information that you include on the story are amazing! And it’s part of what make your stories unique and greatly enjoyable! You wrote each and every character so perfectly that it is like watching them on the show, if not much better, because you managed to portray an amazing romantic relationship in a way I highly doubt the CM writers will ever do. Granted, I do like the idea of Morgan and Emily, but if we ever get our way, I don’t think we’re going to see the awesomeness you’ve written. Thank you, thank you, thank you! You’ve made my week with your this wonderful story!

This chapter is beautiful every last bit of it is simply wonderful. Andrew is gone for good and his dead and last words gave Emily some sort of closure. Granted, what happened to Erica is always going to be with her, as Derek pointed out, but now he know what and how it happened, and most importantly, she knows it will never happen again.

LOL Reid found the ring! That is so hilarious! At least he did not swallow it, because it would’ve been horrible indeed. I love that she said yes! I am happy because of it :D

Wow! Morgan invited Jessica and Melissa to Em’s party! That is great! I did not see it coming but seeing Jessica again, alive and happy and having the chance to meet Melissa was important to her! after all, if they’re turning up fourteen is because she saved them :D lol I do sleep, but your stories are so amazing, that once I start reading them, I feel like I have to keep going ;) Wonderfully done! Thanks a lot :)

The conversation between Rossi and Emily was good, she needed some reassurance from someone other than Derek! And yes, they should’ve known that Andrew was crazy enough to go as far as he has gone in order to get to her! him leaving her alone was always weird, but now, I guess it makes sense. Poor Garcia :( Emily snapped at her but I do understand her, and thankfully, Garcia did too.

OMG! That is amazing! I never connected Andrew shaving his head with the fact that Morgan has his head shaved too. This UnSub is creepy and you’re doing a remarkable job on the case, the story and on everything!

Touching and beautiful on both women. Emily thinking of Desiree and Sarah as family, by comparing Morgan’s sisters’ situation to Erica’s and when Fran asked Derek to bring back the three of them.

Hotch’s decision must’ve been a hard one to make, but I think it was for the best! Emily going alone was a definitive no-no. That is for sure.

Exciting chapter and amazing ending! Seriously the scene between Andrew and Emily’s fight was amazingly well written, the images were so clear on my mind, much better than on tv, because this type of details are not detected easily ;) Of course she will not let Andrew hurt another person she loves, of that, I’m positive! Thank you so very much!

Derek’s family was so welcoming! And Sarah was great when talking to Emily, I too think that she found the perfect family to fit in with.

So Morgan was right and Andrew has shaven his head…and he licked up his brother in the basement? Well, now Matthew knows that helping his brother out was a very bad idea :( and now, he is in Chicago? He knows that Em is there and he is going after her right? OMG! That is creepy, maybe this time, the one who had the profile wrong was Rossi! Is like déjà vu all over again!

What a sweet moment between Em and Morgan and a meaningful one too. She spoke about kids, and I love his explanation by the way, bringing up Nanna Morgan was the beast reassurance ever! And she has finally spoken about what happened when she was 15, and Morgan did not run, he also shared his past with her instead! One more prove of how much he loves her. I never thought of this before, but there’s something similar about their past. She wanted to be accepted and he wanted to have a father, what happened when they were kids/teenagers was because they felt somehow incomplete. And this is something I did not see coming! I never expected that he was going to go after Sarah and Desiree. I am so eager to dins out what is coming up next! You’re great :D Thanks a lot!