I have enjoyed reading all of the chapters so far regarding "First Sight". Your writing skills have improved over the chapters. Possibly writing short POVs of Daniel and Teal'c would widen the possiblties for you. Also possibly writing one or two chapters from inbetween the know missions, possibly further on the series. Altogether really good, i especially liked the way you began the story from when sam was 16 yrs old. i always thought that the writers should have looked at sam's military back ground a little closer.

Love your story. Hope to read more soon.

Good story so far. At last a little bit of progress in the Sam/Jack relationship. I thought after the beginning of the story that it would be more of an AU storyline, but it's more or less following the show. I would like more differences.

Great characterization in this chapter - very insightful.

I really like the twist to your story, but I don't think that the play-by-play of the original episodes is necessary (since we've all watched them). I would focus more on making it your own (because you do a really convincing job when you do) and doing more summary of what we all know has happened. Since you story diverges from the original from this point on it shouldn't be too complicated.

Love the chapter! Solitudes is one of my favorite episodes, and this is pretty much what we all KNEW was going on even though we didn't see it.

I love the story so far. I can't wait to see what you write next. I am a little sad that Jack didn't get to tell Sam that he loved her but at the same time I think that it would have caused a lot of problems. I know they both love each other but it have it out in the open and said out loud is another thing all together. Keep writing and I will keep reading.

You cannot become an officer in the military if you do not have a college degree. Jack could not be ranked as a 2nd Lt. without going to college.

Thank you for a nice update :) It did seem kind of rushed at some points, ie there were more mistakes and run-on sentences. I thought you had Teal'c down pretty well. The dialogue would probably seem more real if you looked at the pacing of the sentences more.

Right now it reads like a gallop, if you get what I'm saying? More use of punctuation marks and chopping up some sentences, then adding some meat to them... it would read much better, though it's quite entertaining right now already :)

Very nice story!

Great chapter, please up date soon and welcome back

Hello SG1 goodness. I saw your calls to review, but decided to leave my review for when I finished the current chapters.

One of my favourite pairings is Sam&Jack, they're just so... e :P your fic is pretty good, considering you're rewriting episodes with the POV spin. Especially with a 1st person POV, since that is pretty difficult to write, imo.

You do have quite a bit of grammar hiccups, I've noticed, which by the way are very easy to eradicate with spellcheck... Occasionally, you write some run-on sentences and sentences that are a bit muddied.

I have to say, I love their dynamic though, even if it's halfway OC. As for the potential rating change, personally I wouldn't mind one bit :P nasty woman that I am.

I also notice you haven't updated for 2 months, so my well-wishes go out to you in the hope that muses give you more creative juices or free time to write up the next chapter. Cheers!

oh yea the tension needs to break! please update again soon!

i cant wait till there together.

also i cant wait to hear what happens when Sam

is taken as a host.

:].

update soon please.

luv this story! really awesome! plz update again soon

Okay! Update! Love this chapter! W

But bad Jack is lying!*smirk*

And why won't he talk about the past? Damnit! It would go SO great with Sam if they talked about it! *smirk*

Good luck for next chapter, and please update soon! *BIG puppy eyes*

Kiss