Enough to wet the appetite :)

I like the gritty intro. It could use a little more clarification on which character it is (it could have been young Bellatrix's point of view for example). With mentions of losing family to the 'other' side, prison, and the killing curse in her youth.

I like that she has a wand and a gun.

I like the premise of Bellatrix being the new head of house. I always thought she belonged as a leader and not a sycophant.

Come back sometime and continue if you have the time and the inspiration :)

Oh, you've got me seriously intrigued! I can't wait to read more.

It's good please continue with writing it and updating it

you should continue it. Or let someone else continue it. this seems like a very good start

k massive cliffhanger there should be more please write more

I still think you should continue this ASAP I love this story so far!

Very, very nice start. I realy like the idea. So why does Bellatrix want Hermione? What happens next?

OMG OMG how could you just stop there! I DEMAND TO KNOW MORE! please please please its too good of a story to be stop *sniff*

you have so many spelling mistakes it's a bit hard to read, but I still like the story. I hope you'll continue with it!

Wow GREAT CHAPTER! Looking forward to the next chapter

Very Interesting Story! I look forward to reading the rest!

Can't wait to read more.

this sounds intriuging please continue, sounds like it has alot of potential and i hope you update soon

wow

continue please

Interesting. I'd like to see more.