This story is amazing please write more dont stop

This is wonderful, too bad you didn't want to do a continuing story for it!

That was a really great job to write this story. It's so strong connected with the serial, but at the same you gave so much space for Helen and Nikola's relationship. My favorite moment is on the roof, everything is just perfect. Thank you for this!)

This was absolutely amazing! :D and so frickin cute :D

When she said she loved him i actually sqeed out loud :D

Brilliant writing and story! :D

AMAZING!

I had a good laugh at the part of Ashley and Henry noticing the flickering lights :)

The story was really well written and I can only hope Magnus and Nikola get together on the series xx

Despite the fact that I like Kate in the series, I would have MUCH rather had these be how all the stuff with Ashely went.

I so love how you wrote Nikola for this. He was strong yet caring and loving while still being himself.

Thank you so much for sharing this.

I love to see a comforting side to Nikola, him wanting to reach out and just take her pain.

Really enjoyed this chapter.

I Love it, you did a wonderful job! :) :D

Wonderful, wonderful story! Just what I needed after End of Nights to cheer me up. Loved this - if you hadn't guessed that already. Good work.

~Dubbers

Wow This was fabulous from start to finish. I loved that you had Nikola taunting John. I loved the angst between Helen and Nikola and the stolen kisses. This was so Hot!

Great story, great ending :) I really wish more would happen with Helen and Nikola in the show there's such chemistry there

*sigh*

OH MY GOSH! This is great! I wish the series had done this, instead of what they did. But this really was a wonderful story, and I hope you continue to write more:)

You know i adore this - but this chapter was such shamelessly wonderful Nikola/Helen. You owe me new windows in my house - i broke them all squeeing.

Hey there,

GREAT work, this is wonderful and I really did enjoy it a WHOLE bunch. It's a wonderful piece of fiction and all and I really hope you write more very soon instead of later. You're a wonderful author.

Melissa

OMG! Update soon lol Great chapter though