Cute

Why oh why did you not call them izzy and tai

I LOVE IT! English is not enough to express how much I like this fic, so I'll write in portuguese: AMEI, ADOREI GAMEI, CAPOTEI, GRITEI, AH! *0*

I'm not crazy, don't worry. I like when a character has his personality well worked, specially when it's showed a sad side of him. I do this with Izzy almost all the time. I also like when Tai and Izzy's friendship is worked, they have a beautiful thing (even if I made Tai saying bad things to Koushiro in my fic...well, this is not relevant right now). I've never thought Tai could be so lonely. Congratulations, your fic is great! By the way, I kind of like Taishiro, but I like more a friendship fanfic with them.

More, More, I want MORE! And I don't just mean the story. Taishiro please!

Hey again! This is Hikari-chan from before! Sorry, I am sometimes logged out when I read stories so when I review I'm not always logged in and at times I am just too lazy to log in. XD; Sorry again about that! I just wanted to say I noticed your changes and read the new chapter, and your story was actually a very enjoyable read overall and a good improvement on before, too _ They both actually seemed -very- in-character now with the second part, especially Koushiro. I did notice though that you had him say "Prodigious!" at one point, that's one of those many things that was only ever in the English dub when it came to their personality changes and added dub quirks like that one, and in general was not in the Japanese version, so I just thought I'd inform you of that, haha. It'd probably still be fine to use here too since it's a fanfic anyway, though. Taichi seemed a bit OOC at times like before -but- he seemed to resolve the issues he was having at the end - which was a very in-character thing for him to do anyway! So that was fine as it related to the story well, anyway :) If you do continue this, I'd love to see some Taishiro added if you decide to do that (heh) though even without it good friendship stories are great, as well. If you do make it a Taishiro story be careful to be sure it is not too OOC for either of them because that can happen sometimes in romance stories and turn readers off your fanfic if they don't like the characterizations used. Would definitely be interested in seeing this updated again! Nice story! :)

Haha I thought this was very sweet :) And I think you offered some Taishirou at the end of the story, which if you're willing to write I would totally read :3 But even so this is a cute friendship story between them :D

Hey Hikari-chan,

You're not signed in so at least I try to answer to your review like this. Thanks, that's very helpful!

Actually I was wondering myself whether I should use italics or quotation marks. I might change this.

And I will definitively add dashes to the Japanese honorifics then. It's funny because I've seen most people use dashes. But I'm studying Japanese, where of course they'd never use them. LOL so I thought it would be better to go without them ).

As for Taichi seeming OOC: He will explain himself pretty soon, don't worry.

This was an extremely helpful review, thank you soo much and continue reading to find out if it will be Taishiro xD.

Aww, this seems like it will have a nice start. Is it going to be Taishiro? I love that pairing :) If not, though, Taichi & Koushiro friendship is always great to see too.

A few grammar pointers:

1) You should probably use quotation marks for your sentences instead of italics, your story will look nicer with better punctuation if you include them

2) I also noticed Koushiro called Taichi "Taichisan" without a dash. Japanese honorifics -always- have a dash before them when they're romanized; for example, they'd look like "Taichi-san", "Hikari-chan", etc.

Other than that it actually seems nicely written - well, Taichi crying so suddenly seems a bit OOC (out-of-character) for him, but otherwise it looks like your story is off to a good start. Taichi and Koushiro friendship is rare to see but always nice as well. Keep up the nice work! :)