This was very cute to read. Thanks for writing this. I enjoyed reading. Hope your writing skills improve.

This is so sweet, you have such a way with words. I love it so much!

Gorgeous, sweet and melancholy. Very satisfying!

I loved this story. You described zack very well too.

Awww. ;u; Honest sweet stories that make me cry? THIS IS AT THE TOP OF THE LIST. ;n;

it was beautiful

Such childish innocence and bittersweet actions.

Subtly dark & yet noticeably sweet - that's Zack&Aerith for ya.

This was a nice take on Aerith's side of the relationship, the thoughts and interactions - I don't think you could've nailed it down any better.

Gotta love that fluffy Zack/Aerith. I'm not generally into FFVII fanfic, but I ship this pairing and loved this perfect little moment between them.

That was so beautiful! I actually got fast shivers from reading this story! :) Amazing!

Such a sweet little story. You captured the essence of the characters quite nicely, and the emotion of the moment too. Well done.

NOOOOOO I CRIED MAYBE BECAUSE OF THE MUSIC I WAS HEARING WHILE READING I LOVE IT!

T_T!

and that art where you said to have him in her hand an know that you will lose it D; T_T nooooooooooo

This was beatiful written

I feel like I've been drenched in syrup. But in a good way. Very sweet! XD

I don't usually read Zerith fics primarily because they are set in CC, and it makes me sad thinking about Zack (hot, charming, dashing Zack XD) dying. :( This isn't an exception, ... but that doesn't mean you did not do well. Comforting!Aerith is so, so sweet. I think you gave me cavities.

And the kiss - Shy!LaughingfromEmbarrassment!Zack made my heart melt. Man, how can Aerith ever think of forgetting a sweetie like him and replacing him for Cloud? Because Zack is so much better. XD (Don't get me wrong though, I love Cloud in his own right. But Zerith totally rocks my world.)

Thanks for this. :)

Hello there. I saw you in the reviews for "Ghost" and decided to check you out. This is a nice little fillip and fleshes out a very small scene in "Crisis Core", right? I've only seen it on YouTube cutscenes. Zack's an irresistible character. Aerith-I'm more neutral about, not knowing her very well. Gamers have strong feelings about her, I know. But I like how she and Zack get along. Thanks... mc

Loved it! I would've squeeled like the fangirl I am if my parents weren't asleep in the other room. Awesome!

Good luck with your career in or out of writing. ;)