i'm glad to have found your work. You stayed true to who sasuke and naruto is. I can bet that every reader had drooled (not just on the sex part) but on how such raw feelings can be described well in a one-shot. Kudos!

Wahhhh! I want this to happen in the manga! Okay not the sex thing, 'cause that is being greedy to ask for so much, but the whole kissing thing, YES! Because I can totally see that happened. We all know it has crosses Sasuke's mind. Wow, this was really good though. The whole thing made really good sense and it made me feel like this was really happening in the manga. It could totally happen! D Oh comeone, we all get this feeling Sasuke is gay for Naruto. It would make sense. o.o;

Anyway breathtaking job!

aiya

if this had really happend in episode or manga i would have scream and cry around my house like crazy this should had really happend, right? awesome this made me cry. i luv it.

Wow. Very great story, and soooo sad. Poor Naruto, still chasing after Sasuke after all that time and still going home alone. Great one-shot!

wow...what an interesting story. i really liked it, it was really a pleasure to read. ~Samsal

I usually only ever read sasunaru but this was really good!:D

Aw, the ending was sad! But I loved it!

This was a really good story.

THIS MUST MUST MUST MUST HAVE A SEQUEL. you know, ive read almost every sasunaru fanfic out there and I have to tell you, by far this is my number 2. my number one is Another Corny Romance Movie. I love it. I want sasuke to return home with naruto after they reveal their feelings to each other. Will you please write me a sequel containing those conditions? :)

Loved it! Such vivid detail. Awesome work. :D

Now just update your Yullen! :P

Such a wonderful one-shot. What a pleasure to come across this gem. You stayed true to the characters and created a very moving scene. Those poignant words "I'm sorry", at the end, really impacted on the angst. Thanks for sharing this! A true pleasure to read well-written and tasteful yaoi. _

*sob**sob* Gods i'm not for angst i'm gonna cry looked so real u are a grat writer!

omg this story was so great! I loved it.

I feel bad, I thought during the whole 'scene' Naruto was preparing him!

Lol, I finally figured out it wasn't a finger when you said he came inside of him 0.o

I feel stupid, lol

Great chapter though!

Guh that was amazing! This type of fic always gets to me. I loved how you did it from Sasuke's point of view it made the angst so intense! And it was amazingly written. I'm not much of an angst reader - I'm a sucker for a happy ending - but I'm so glad I read this. It was just...indescribable.