Reviews for Exclave
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
Perfect missing scene. I can picture it happening just exactly like this.
autumnamberleaves chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
Great job! I would have loved to see this in the actual episode.
Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
This was a tragic story, I saw it again just recently. I wish to heaven adults today would stop blowing off bullying as part of growing up, they get over it, they learn to deal with it. One of my friends was very overweight throughout his school years. When those kids went on a killing spree in Colorado, he told me he understood exactly how they felt. Kids today are turning into killers like Owen, or they commit suicide to get free of their tormentors.
Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
That was a tragic episode and Reid wss right to blow up at the local yokels. Kids get bullied they learn to deal with it, whatever asshole excuse they made for justifying their inaction. I cried as that played out, with Reid understanding exactly what it felt like to be Owen. Glad he had Morgan in your story.
Love Of Blood chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
Please keep on writing for this story. Please keep on writing.
Magil chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Good speculation. It fits right in there.
zookitty chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
that was perfect. I needed that. Just watched the episode tonight and couldn't stop crying cause I loved it so much. This episode really reminded me of why I love the team, and your story brought it home
Lexikal chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Awesome one-shot, very well written. I love your style! I promise to read more (and review more) when I am not bleary-eyed tired. great writing though, keep up the great work!
PinkHimeLacus chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Awwwh what a great chapter, I love it.
LadyBluePhoenix chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
This is good... I love Morgan as a character
cleared account 02 chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Amazing, as always.
Crocodile Heart chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
I really enjoyed reading this. It makes for a great bridge between the two scenes in the episode. The characters are in character, which your voice doesn't drown out while still being unique in its "tone."

Great work.
poweroverbirds chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
I wish this had happened in the episode! Great job.
gibrelina chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
This makes a lot of sense, awesome scene!
signed off chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
I loved Hotch here. I love it when he uses his profiley powers for good, and that he knew Reid needed Morgan. EM is a favorite Hotch and Reid episode of mine. I don't know if you noticed but in the scene on the street, when they're arresting Owen, Hotch puts his hand or Reid's back, like he's just checking he's okay, but his expression is more angry and worried and Reid is totally looking right back at him, like "yeah, I'm sorry I worried you." This one-shot seems to fit with that same sentiment. A worried Hotch and a Hotch who doesn't want Reid slipping back. And I think Reid is way more like Hotch than Hotch wants him to be, because Hotch lets his emotions drive him to do stupid things all the time. And, in short, I really liked this and could see it fitting right in to the episode.
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