Reviews for Improper |
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jeyelsee chapter 1 . 5/4 My dear NejiHina really has to relieve that sexual tension between them! A sequel perhaps? Or more NejiHina fics! |
jeyelsee chapter 1 . 5/4 Oh that was really good and hot! Love this! |
Duckie511 chapter 1 . 12/27/2019 I'm so happy I stumbled upon this! It was so good! |
00Misty chapter 1 . 10/24/2015 ... wow. No other words, just.. wow. |
LadyAmazone chapter 1 . 11/11/2014 Please write a second part - The whole thing is sooo amazing - Id loooove to read more of it :D |
Beautifully Natural chapter 1 . 4/5/2014 OMGEE. How SEXY. I love it! I was squealing and pretty much-ly dying of sexiness on the floor! Your an amazing author! WOO-HOO. I really loved this story you did. It was like, sexy and DIRTY perfection! Oh! Get some Hinata! x3 |
aurora0914 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013 That was really really really really cute. And hot. And awesome. PLEASE MAKE MORE NEJIHINA! A SEQUEEEEEEL! |
NejiHina fangirl chapter 1 . 9/30/2013 OMG! I was practically squealing throughout the story! It is so well-written and all...I think this is the best NejiHina I've ever read. Absolutely loved it. |
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 4/29/2013 I'm not really a big yaoi fan.. I find myself wallowing in great fangirl grief at such notions.. but Naruto and Sasuke hooking up together instead of with billboard brow is actually more appreciated on my part.. Am I considered evil if such were the case? XD Moving on.. Goodness me, even Hinata's expletives were so proper.. Neji! You on the other hand have such a potty mouth! XD Neat read.. I love it. XD |
Simple Daisy chapter 1 . 9/4/2011 Nice story! |
cloudsandsilvers chapter 1 . 4/27/2011 love it : seeing neji so improper really is sexy :)) love how you wrote the characters here :) it's like their still in character but out of character at the same time. AWESOME! :) |
Jaque Weasley chapter 1 . 1/6/2011 oh gosh, perfect ** |
Sammi-lou chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 its a great story but i dont understand why its rated M when nothing bad happened |
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 12/11/2010 Awesome~! |
Musichowler chapter 1 . 11/25/2010 It was hot and made me smile. Well done. ;-p |