I think this guy is either dead or quit fanfiction...

But we don't know the reason though..

how did Artemis go from being controlled and "trapped" in Chapter 4 to saving Annabeth in this chapter.

Next chapter please

Next chapter

Whoa that was something

That was something

This isn't good

That was new

Zeus was always and will be an idiot

Dam he got beat

Good story, i understand that you're trying to follow the actual plot line here but it's best if you try to add more extra bits to da story. I'm not saying that you should stray off the main story but what i meant is like that you should add additional pieces of your own ideas (the current is good but you'll need more to make it more entertaining) so that people won't go "Oh hey, i know what would happen next, they're going to blah blah blah *continued reading story* See? I was right after all." In summary of what i'm trying to say here is that you should use the element of surprise to your advantage in order to entertain people and to keep them from falling into the abyss of complete boredem. Although my instincts tells me that you're not going to update for a while, i'm still telling you this so that it might help you in your future writings. That is all and best of luck, i shall await for your future update

love the story

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the story is good but how long does it take to update

nicely done naruto is just like his mentor