Reviews for FML F MY LIFE |
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![]() ![]() Konichi! Samas mos togalas sicomosas! Phoa ming phat ching mai! ~kim chi yonga |
![]() ![]() Konichiwa, ExXxj San! Nuni desca? ( how are you? ) I love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yea! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg.. more verryyy soon please! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() pleeease write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I want to know about Travis and what is the connection? So was he imagining having kids with Leah? Come back, come back, come back! I love how this story started out with Jake and Ness. You didn't take it overboard with mental anguish but just rolled with it. I love how you write them, like teenagers lol The pack is always my fave and how they interact with each other! They are just hilarious. It was sad that Ness lost one of the babies :( Bittersweet definitely. And poor Leah, I can't believe Marcus didn't stick around, what a d*uche! Kind of weird that Sam isn't mentioned much but whatever lol Your question about Edward v. Jacob even though this is years later, totally Jacob! Edwards patience and sophistication is not appealing, he's supposed to be a teenager, and nobody ever seemed like fun in that clan except maybe Emmett in my opinion. I wish you would really come back and if its spelling and grammar you need help with I can be your beta :) So you can finish your story ;) I also want to find out what happen to that c*nt?! And Paul Hahaha funny guy! |
![]() ![]() Finish it, it's been what 4-5 years! |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry but I could not even get past the first chapter the way you made the characters and the consent swearing just ruined it. You made Nessie a slutty idiot who goes around acting like she is a five year old. It is disgusting and the character from to book would not be like that at all. You also did the same thing to Jacob and other characters. Reading this felt like reading some horny teenagers diary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loveeee this story! I hope you update soon . I would like 2 see what happens with jake nessie and the baby . |
![]() ![]() Too Many Fucks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far, love the storyline :) can't wait to read more :D update sooon :) thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol i like the end of the chpter ! Wtf thts jt kim! Lmfao |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story sooooo much i really really wish you would continue the story. even though i stopped reading it for awhile bc i was busy i came back to it and remembered why i loved it so much...IT's JUST A FUCKIN GREAT STORY! - |
![]() ![]() ![]() i lurvee tht songg. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() uh oh i think some1 is prego! lol cant wait 2 c wt happns |