Love the story. Edward finally got his head out of his ass! :)

I loved it! I can't wait to see more.

I still love this story!

Absolutely love it! Is this the last chapter to this? Will you be writing more or will there be a sequel? Because I’m definitely wanting to know what happens next!

Please don't forget about this story and post the next chapter!

I really like the idea, but I find it very unrealistic that Bella and Edward would not have investigated to see if the other was real or not. Edward could easily have just gone to Pheonix. I wish the plot would have started with them having actually been aware of each other before Forks. Also, if they can really know everything about each other, then how could Bella possibly not know that Edward is already in Forks? She would have moved in with her dad immediately upon knowing this. Like I said, really cool idea. I just think the plot needs a lot of work.

Also, there's a lot of errors... You got Alice and Jasper's names wrong. Alice wouldn't even be aware of her real name at that point because the Cullens haven't come across James yet. Her name is Mary Alice Brandon in any case, but Alice Mary Brandon. Jasper's real name is not Hale, just Whitlock. You kept referring to lunch as dinner for some reason throughout the chapter. And school doesn't end after biology, Bella has gym. No school would have lunch and then only one class afterwards... A lot of other minor details, but these are the only I can remember off the top of my head.

Anyways, thanks for the story! I hope you come back and rewrite it one day.

please update the story i love it! its awesome.

i love your story, its beautiful and amazing

Curious where this had planned to go... but I’m assuming the characters are leading you at this point. They have vivid personalities.

Love this story will you ever finish it thanks

I love your writing style! Eons above the average fanfic writer!

Thanks for writing this wonderfull story! What a pity, you didn't write more chapters. But I appreciate the ones, you have written. One of the best stories I read so far.

So good, i love your story!

Poor Edward

The lemon was pretty good. The only thing that I would change is to make it a bit more descriptive. There was just a little bit too much vagueness and interpretation for my taste.