Prefer riku as seme :D no offense but it is still good

I don't think I was suppose to laugh while reading this story, but I did. It's just hard to image.. The keyblade drawing blood and causing pain instead of the usual flashing stars and rainbows. Oh and whole Sora/Riku thing...Pretty funny. Good laugh.

i recommend you read some of 's work on this site. it was good, but it could have been better. you have greater potential than this. all in all, good attempt!

Seme!Sora makes me happy. :3

Hurt and Uke!Riku also makes me happy.

I'm so weird. D:

BUT LORDS, I LIKED THIS.

*walks away*

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SoraRiku is one of my OPTs too. 8D It's NaruSasu as number one, SoumiRitsuka from Loveless as two, then SoraRiku then AxelRoxas. lol. those are the only boylove pairings I'll read fanfics on anyway. I love uke!Riku. I like my ukes to be pretty boys, but I also like them topping their seme and owning his a$$ too. lol. I'm not picky on who tops, I just prefer the pretty boy be the uke. *_* that and I love silly, dorky, boyish semes. and dominant, snarky, queen b!tch ukes. lol. silly me. XD

I am still new to the kingdom hearts fandom and just started the games (though I read that manga with Roxas and Axel, the 200something days one) so I don't know...why is Riku wearing a blindfold?

wow, the smex was kinda deep. usually you just write it hot but I like this way too. 8D I feel a little bad for Sora, afraid of losing his Riku-coughagain. I don't mind Kairi, I don't like her paired with either of the boys but she's an okay character. ha ha. poor Sora though, losing Kairi and thinking about her after smex with Riku. poor Riku too. hard to compete with a dead girl.

I liked this. the angst was touching. different from what you usually write for the Naru fandom, and it's always fun to experiment. XD Good job!

SMOOCHES

MUCH LOVE

yey riku's wearing his cloak again! yey a dead kairi!

thank you*sjakes your hand*dead kariai or howevr u spell her name brings me joyif only the game makers saw it that way

Yes, yes yes! I love it, and yay, first KH story from you and I'm impressed So Kairi doesn't really die? Nu V.V

This is a really good story. I like seme sora. This story is one of the few well writen story I ever read.

you got that right.

'angsty faggotry' indeed. : /

hi i've been a fan of your stories for a while. i wanted to let know someone stole your story. its called the prostitute and podium stolen by ichigo123663. save your story.

What a twist! (Okay, no twist,lol) but I really did enjoy that Seme!Sora a lot actually. Perhaps this awakened something I didn't know I liked? N e wayz, I love angst, I love this pairing and you are such an awesome writer. Oh! By the way-I think someone has stolen one of your stories. It's the Sasu/Naru 'Podium' story you wrote a while back. I just spotted it but it's called 'the prostitute and the podium' or something. Please save your story from that thief! The author's name is Ichigo123663. Some people are so shameless!

Dark sexy. And beautiful/vivid imagery. I could hear the waves on the beach and crashing against the dock. I could hear the keyblade scraping against the wood. I loved all those little details. Wish it had been longer so you could've further explored their feelings and what happened with Kairi but I understand that sometimes these ficlets decide how long they want to be. Very nice.

This was very dark... extremely good, but dark. I hope you write more! X)

That's really sad...great story though!