Awwww!
Perfect i loved it.

Awwww...I started out hating it cause I always have when people put Ash out to be a womanizer in their stories although it makes sense with Brock around but as I continue to read it I really started to like it as he catch feelings then by the end if it I was aaaawwwww so sweet and cute, I want a part two of the story. Never expected to like it so much.

Sorry, hit post by accident.
Anyway, it's so satisfying after learning about how they decided to mess up the 20th movie.
I feel like this is the perfect story to make people remember that even if Ash hadn't fried her bike they could still meet thanks to fate.

This feels só satisfying after learning about How TPC

Great story, I enjoyed it a lot! :)

I absolutely loved it! And I like how you included the reference to how their relationship actually was and how it started :) A nice bit of irony for the story

Great story, love "What If's" in the Pokemon world. This was one of the good ones.

Loved it (:

Update

I really like this.

Waterflower, not Williams

10/10 would read again. Don't forget to mark this as completed!

Magnificent.

I realized I didn't review this even though I favorited. O.O Sorry about that. Well, there are lots of good points, and you're pretty much a pro, so no use in pointing them out, but I'll do it anyway. XD Believable, not out of character at all, nice idea, and well written. Yeah. All the qualities of a really good story. :)

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.