Still awesome

very well done. good description and use of my favorite pairing :)

A few spelling mishaps, but very minor- I loved it. It's so short, yet so poignant and believable. I could picture this happening. I love the element of a spot of comfort amongst the horror.

Wow, this is a realy sweet one-shot. You could make more chapters of this or, maybe, a sequel or something.

Anyway, very nice fanfic

This seems like it could be more than 1 chapter, but whatever I still think it's a sweet one-shot.

very well written, i enjoyed it very much. thank you for posting it!

Really nice :)

You've shown Valtiel in an interesting way - like a human, I almost forgot while reading he's a random creature or a monster or something like that...