*Jared Kleinman voice* kInKy

This might have been one of the best fanfictions I’ve ever read! You should re-read your story’s more often, there were some sentences with small mistakes but apart from that, the story was a very well read with fascinating details. I really like your style, very well done!

(Supernal Dawn here)
To add onto my previous comment, I love how the Obi-Wan dialogue to Anakin was very much realistic (i.e., he responded by saying things I could actually imagine him saying- very in-character). I loved the slow pace, and enjoyed seeing Ani like this. Loved the combination of him being confident/cocky but also submissive. I also liked how both of them admitted they'd been fantasizing about each other for years, since that adds another layer of depth/desire. I agree with the reviewer who said it was super sexy without the explicit mention of genitalia/graphics- it's rare to find fics that do that so well.

There are quite a a few type-o's/awkward wording/grammar issues so I would def recommend getting a Beta reader. All in all, I really appreciated your portrayal of how they used the force to explore and enhance their relationship, and the story in general. Great fic!

This is amazing for your first star wars fic, and is by far the best anakin/obi-wan slash I've read. I appreciate how the focus is on the emotions, and the build-up leading up to it, and that it's not super graphic. I would be down to see a more slashy one too, though. Are you going to write any more with this pairing! Kudos!

This is beautiful

This is beautifully written! I wish the actual sex wasn’t skipped over. I was really enjoying the read. It ended somewhat abruptly. But again, a wonderful read!

Great story

Whenever I watch episodes 2 & 3 I always giggle whenever Anakin calls Obi-Wan “Master” because I envision a scene like this. I’m glad that I’m not the only one who thought about it this way! Thank you for writing this, for I really enjoyed reading it.

This was awesome, I loved it! I would've liked the actual snut to be longer a little more ... In depth? But otherwise, a great fic. Stay awesome!

I've read a lot of ani obi stories, but none explained their emotions like this! Really excellent job, probably the best I've read! You had a great, invigorating plot, which is hard to do in these types of stories. Overall, LOVED IT!

This is the most amazing fanfic I have ever read... Period. It is sooo realistic, I feel like that would be exactly how obi wan would act in that situation :3 good job n I would like to say that you have 'mastered' this.. :)

Nice. There's certainly something to your theory, and even if it's wrong it makes for a great story! :)

Kinky. I doubt either of them are getting ANY sleep that night. I loved the mischief.

Wow that was amazing! I mean.. besides the "two hours later" fill in the blank with your imagination, it was great! haha Okay I'm whinning. But truly, this was hot. And I thought it was a great interpretation of Anakin's character. I could visualize Hayden, but in the way I wish he had played the part. Obi-wan was spot on, I loved that it was from his perspective almost throughout. Would love to read more Anakin/Obi-wan from you! Have a cookie
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I'm in love with this fic.