Reviews for Making Us
Charlie0925 chapter 38 . 2/25
Brilliant writing here honey! I loved this fic! ;o)
Wolvie26 chapter 38 . 1/16
Love it! Is there a sequel?
tdetwilightlover chapter 21 . 12/2/2019
Repetitively stating “I am not a child stop treating me like a child” is the biggest way to make others see you as a child -.-
goldseadragon chapter 32 . 9/8/2019
This chapter had me roaring! Between Peter rolling along through the forest and mind-controlled vampire danceoffs, omg!
B4bidden chapter 38 . 7/26/2019
absolutely love this story 1st time I've read it and definitely won't be the last
suziq968 chapter 38 . 7/21/2019
This was really great. I'm heading to your profile to see if there's a sequel, but even if not you left it in a good place. Thanks for sharing.
Akra 23 chapter 5 . 2/10/2019
A
Auroura'sDawn chapter 20 . 8/8/2018
I don't like how everyone seems to hang up on jasper.. Bella is being a baby and I hope she stops acting like a bitch soon.. I wanna smack her
Feistyvixen chapter 38 . 6/12/2018
Eeeee! What an amazing storyline! I love what you’ve done with Charlie! I LOVE the idea of him ruling in his own way and love that oh so stern and law abiding Charlie is the one with his powers. Everyone really. What you’ve done with each of the characters is just phenomenal! Thanks for a great read!

-Melia
Guest chapter 38 . 4/5/2018
Feels a little INcomplete.
Guest chapter 22 . 4/4/2018
Jasper in Elf mode! What a PRICELESS mental image! I WANT those shoes. what makes it REALLY FUNNY, is that at work in the interval between thanksgiving break and Christmas break (I work food service at a university in VA), I safety pin BELLS to my shoes!
Guest chapter 12 . 4/3/2018
thanks for letting the Pack allow Bella to change without it breaking the treaty.
Michelle Law chapter 6 . 4/2/2018
I didn't jump on the Twilight Saga Bandwagon until April of 2014, so I missed all of the movies in the theater. It must have been AMAZING to see them for the first time, especially that first kiss in Bella's bedroom! Hubbahubba!
Michelle Law chapter 5 . 4/2/2018
You've probably already been told this, but the nickname "God of War" for Jasper was originated by IdreamofEddy in her fabulous tale, " Colliding Meteors". She is also responsible for the Peter who "just knows Shit".
Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 24 . 1/5/2018
Piggy Petey Hilarious
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