I really liked your story. I think you balanced sensitive Ed and anger issue Ed very well.

Nice!

I wish you would have kept going but at least you gave it an ending! Nothing wrong in this chapie!

aww dat was a nice way to end that chapter

haha! bait!

I like this story D

Quickk question, any yaoi? -is against it- Because I'm seeing some undertones, but iunno if it's just for humour xD

I wasn't sure how I was going to feel about the whole Ed/Roy theme in here. It's still new to me. What really caused me to gain interest and what I was really amazed by is your writing. You're an amazing writer! You're doing a great job and I do hope to read more in the very near future. Keep me posted.

AWESOME!Hope to read more SOON! You ROCK!