I really like this. Even though the timeline was different since Voldemort went to school in the 40's while Lucius was in school in the 70's, but really who cares. It was a great short story. Keep writing.

Voldemort is around sixty years old, a couple years older than hagrid, but lucius was in fifth year when snape was in first year (it says in the fifth book), and voldemort was already of school by that time, a decade or two older than vodlemort...

but other than that fact, very good xD

i really liked it. i like the imagery. xD

Lucius was born in 1954. Voldemort was born in 1926. There is a line in the book which refers to 1943 as about fifty years ago in the second book (which is 1992).

Lucius was several years ahead of Severus Snape in Hogwarts, who we know is in his thirties when Harry is eleven.

Regretfully, therefore they can't have been at Hogwarts at the same time. The age difference is too great.

However, this story was so well-written that I don't even care about the AU-ness. I have never read Lucius/Voldemort before, but you may have hooked me.

Out of curiosity, are you currently beta-ing?

Nicely done. I've been looking for some submissive Lucius fics, and there aren't really all that many of them around. I especially liked how you realistically portrayed Riddle/Voldemort's character, and through Lucius' eyes.

Thanks for a very interesting read. This is the first story of this pairing I have read, and it was most enjoyable. Particularly the descriptions of Tom's steel control - very subtle but very potent.

All the best with future works.