I've had this story saved for years and I'll finish it, then come back months later wanting to read it all over again! It's such a good read!

my heart is going wild for this, what a beautiful piece of work.

This was a good story

ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE YOU ARE AMAZING!

Well done! Rarely do I find a fanfiction written in such an enticing way that I do not want to put it down; this story is one of those few, thank you.
-A.

Will you make a story about the first movie on how they fell in love before and starting Narnia.

I know I'm so late to this couple but it is amazing can't believe I missed them. Wonderful just wonderful.

I just reread this for like the thousandth time. I love your Peter and Susan.

I loved this story!

I loved this ending. LOVED it.

The story is so wonderful that I can’t even find the proper word to describe it, to be honest. Remember how I said that "Fear and Love" is my P/S favorite story? Well, it is, but this one is just as great. In my head, it’s kind of a sequel to "Fear and Love" and because of the ending, the storyline has an amazing closure. It was so fantastic to see how you stuck to the movie and filled so many plot holes in it – that in itself was a fantastic idea. And I adore how you changed the plot in that one point and let them stay in Narnia for longer… they deserved it so much.
Your writing, as I said before, is really amazing. You portray the characters so well, I can see them in my head all the time, and no one ever seems out of character (well, Caspian probably does a little bit, but who cares about him? ;) I’m so glad that I found your Peter/Susan fics… well, and right now there’s nothing I wish more for than another one of those.

Thank you (again) so much for writing & sharing your stories!

Awwww...
This fanfic is so great that I actually became sad after finishing it. I was pretty upset during part of it because I just wanted Peter and Susan to be together sooo badly! But it ended up even better than I expected. Congratulations!

i love this. it gives me closure and satisfaction that this story gives me hope because I hate how in the book c.s. lewis leaves susan incomplete in her tragedy with no hope to conquer her tragic and incomplete down fall.

thanks.

I loved reading every bit of it.

Brilliant - great tension/conflict and perfect ending. Loved it.

can i see the ring and on chapter one ( i forgot to ask) who threw lucy an apple?