Hmm this is getting fun.

Wow! Great peice writing, please keep it up.

Loved the story! Can't wait for more! 333

I...I want to sit in Jonathan Crane's lap! Thats the first thought that came to my mind as I finished this awesome chapter. Where has my smooth flowing speech/writing gone now? Out the window it seems, as my inner fangirl took over and whatnot. I love all the Joker quotes you've incorporated, they are so appropriate with the story. Sometimes with other fictions it seems too forced and akward, but this is just perfect to the point of seamlessness. I'm sad that the story is over, but so thrilled that you've gone and thougth of a sequal to bring us! It is about 3am and you've kept my attention through the entire night! All I can say is that your writing is addictive and satisfying. Oh, and Kudos to you for your Riddler, I love him and his witty riddles. Such a wonder you are my friend! Congratulations for finishing this story and thank you ever so much for a wonderful tale! Adios!

Well, this is the second attempt to review this chapter. My internet keeps going out and I almost didnt have the resolve to try again. This happened a chapter or two back already, and then I couldnt muster my courage to try again, but now I owe it to you to try again. Its frustrating to think that all my heartfelt praise can be washed away. Ugh. Anyway, back to the review. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your elements. Theres just so many. Tierney is caught on all sides. She's involved intimatley with all the rogues in one way or another. Harley is her psychiatrist who is on the verge of breaking. Jonathan has some sort of gravitation to her, AND, he has a plan. Joker has mysterious and unknown insight to her past. Its a cage on all sides and I can't wait to see how this story ends up. As per my last review, which probably didnt reach you, I was wondering if you wouldnt repost this story to refresh it. That way you could have in circulation with newly posted stories and it would garner attention afresh. I believe that you could gain new readers and you deserve the attention and reviews for all your genious in regards to this wonderful work of fiction. Just my thoughts, you certainly don't have to follow it. also, I can't thank you enough for involving one of my favorite instruments. My other, and favorite, being the mournful and chaotic violin. Oh, and I love the small moment between Tierney and Crane! Thanks again friend!

Oh dear, you really are a sadistic one, you know that? No, really I do enjoy cliff hangers such as these. They keep the anticipation flowing like a river and that is something that I admire about writing. Honestly, i think you've kept the Joker well in character and that is also something worth admiration. I truelly do want to delve deeper into this wonderful plot, I hardly collected myself enough to review! I suppose I'm lucky that I caught this story a little later on becuase I have the very welcome liberty of waltzing into the next chapter unhindered by wishing and waiting. I was pleasantly suprised also, by how you weaved the Joker's nickname for Harleen into this fic. I would feel catastrophically unsettled if the Joker had twisted every word and object that defined me, I feel for Piper and Harley. He truelly is a King at what he does. Again, well done. I'm dying to continue, so I bid you Adieu!

Hello! I must say that I'm really enjoying your work of fiction. I don't usually like original characters, but yours, Tierney/Piper, really fits in with Gothams population. I also love the fact that her path is riddled with mysteries that involve our favorite rogues. Also, I find it interesting that Harley is our protagonist's psychiatrist, it certainly helps build on thier characters and the authenticity of your Tierney's involvement in Gotham. Oh, thanks for involving Crane in this Chapter, I adore the dear Scarecrow and all he does. Another thing, I didnt feel like signing in before I posted this review, so if you happen to wish to know my screen name, it is silverkittn1991. I simply wanted to share my thoughts with you before they became muddled and worth less than fresh ones. Take care!

:o It wasn't a horrid poem. ... anyways... 3 ur story thus far. *Resumes reading it* -Taku

I really like the title of this story and I love the next one as well! Looks great, I'll be sure to check it out...I probably should go to bed now haha but I needed to finish this one. Wonderful job, really enjoyed it!

"The question isn't who would scream, it's who wouldn't scream if they were woken up that way" Definitely agree with that ha. I would freak out. Hah, Edward is too funny sometimes lol. What a situation for a riddle. I feel bad for her, that sucks. You know, I've never seen a person let her do handsprings but she does do them haha...person being writer, that's really cool! Great chapter!

Yeah, I can see him not really liking her. At least before she goes crazy anyway ha. "You keep asking me what my name is. My name doesn't matter. What matters is who I am." He leaned forward so that their faces were only two feet apart. "I'm the Joker." Very good point. Good of Crane to teach him how to open them haha. Great chapter!

Haha, Jervis just cracks me up. I can't wait to see Burton's version of Alice in Wonderland, it's going to be insane. Oh...this is getting intense! Gonna keep reading ha, Great chapter!

Oh dear, she's already letting the Joker get to her. Good of her to let her in on the plan though...last her being Piper. I love that scene...the singing and the piano playing. Simply wonderful. Great job!

I wonder if they think of that haha...the fact that he knows the Asylum probably better than they do. I think you've got him down perfectly in this chapter...especially with Harley and his conversation. I think the Joker would be a hard character to escape from, even if you had a really good book. Great chapter!

It must be so frustrating to have amnesia. It's frustrating for me when I forget simple things, much less my entire past. I googled Jervis finally cause I had no idea who he was haha...he seems very interesting. I like him lol. I mean, he's crazy, but I think he'd be fun to talk to sometimes. In a controlled environment. Although that was stupid...I honestly dont' blame her. That's how bad that situation must suck, I'd punch something too. Aw, what a cute scene between them. I love it! Great job!