You do have an evil streak...glad you held it in check this round. :}

Oh, dear. But I liked this ending.

At least Jack is starting to show his love...just that Ianto is so emotionally wounded it will take extra time for him to believe it.

Oh, crap!

An interesting sf/fantasy/horror problem.

Perhaps with the wrap sheet coming as building inspectors would be better... great chapter for dialog, character, plot and action.

Good characterization and plot pacing.

Very interesting... I wonder if you could take the episode as is and just say that Ianto forgot about his new status in the singularity club.

Intense.

Your version of Ianto here should know better than to take cues from the Highlander television series.

Now that was an interesting twist on things! Ran Jack and Ianto through a wringer, though. Well done!

Good, satisfying ending, but still want more. Pretty please, with chocolate cookies?

Keep writing!

Yay to us Saps! Last time I checked - that's what made waffles taste good! Only it's boiled forever and called Maple Syrup! So...following that analogy...does that mean we're the Maple Syrup to your stories? (LOL!) Don't mind me - way too late, still haven't slept and totally hopped up on anti-histamines that should be knocking me out! Allergies are murder this season...so NOT a happy camper right now.

Great story again, Deeta. Loved the idea of an angsty Ianto living forever...yeah, he is SO giving Jack a run for his money... And I bet in a crazy sort of way Jack would love every single heart stopping moment of it.

Can't wait to see what you do next!

Darque

...And normally I'd be 'angstangstangstangst...' but this was so beautiful ;) xx

I love this story and I love the way it ends. I really don't care how much Ianto has to go through in the story (well, I care that he's in pain, but you know what I mean) as long as it's good at the end. That means Janto forever and happy.

Judy

no! don't be mean to Ianto next time...he needs some slack, Jack never got that. anyways, great chapter, I'm totally hooked ont his story!