This story was absolutely adorable. Even with the angst. My gosh, Noah was such a tortured soul in this and Rachel was a helping hand in it. It's good that they found their way back to each other in the end. Thanks for sharing.

It was a little hard to follow the story because I had to keep going back to figure out if this is happening in the past or the present. But, the story and plot was great.

the story was effin incredible.

loved it.

Would you like help overcoming your writers block, or just soldier through it on your own ?

Anyways, I have a prompt/request. It's Puck/Rachel (of course, I'm predictable, and deeply in love with these two at the moment - as always)...

Ok, here it as. As a dare, Rachel tries out for the cheerio's, because Kurt believes she wouldn't last a day. I'd love it to feature a Puck/Rachel relationship that has been developing for a while, instead of just Puck deciding she looks good in a cheerio's uniform. Back story can be included, and Santana/Brittany/Rachel friendship would be adored. And my latest craving is angst, so see if you can somehow throw that in there somewhere.

Good luck :)

beautiful

this was so awesome! You write Puck so perfectly... I really liked the refrences to fairytales.

This just broke my heart over and over again. The story you told was so real and utilized the right amount of ethos without degenerating into useless pathetic emotion. Your writing was beautiful and understated. I'm just so impressed.

thanks for the happy ending. I just read this fic straight through, and frankly, I am tired of crying. :) Great story.

please update soon!

Can I just say that this is probably one of the best non-pornoish puckleberry fics I've ever read. You made me cry. Utterly. I wanted to hug everyone and smack his dad and give Puck a heart-compress and and and.

This better be one in what will prove to be a long legacy of gleefic that doesn't need sexing to made it emotional.

~Angel

Aw. I think the ending is super cute. I mean, where's my grape slushie? That's perfect. Haha.

:D Loved it, totally.

I enjoyed your story. You have a very unique writing style.

I don't want it to end :')

Loved it :D

Very nice. I really enjoyed it. :D