Very good story ! Disappointed to see that it had been discontinued.

I like this. It’s a good story. It would be nice to be able to finish it one day.

omg, i can't believe how anakin just straight up murdered the viceroy like that! i mean i CAN, but it wasn't in anger but with pure calculation, which was the unexpected part. an anakin that actually plans his rule breaking is apparently even more dangerous

Just a quick review to say I've really enjoyed this story and it was a shame it wasn't continued.

OH..

I'm adoring this story and I usually don't leave a review until the end but I got stuck on 'Dukoo' as I think you meant 'Dooku'. Again, adore your writing .

I hope that you find the time and inspiration to finish your story.

yes I hope Sideous wasent banashed as easily as this or that some threat a crediable threat still exists in the star wars world but I Laughed at Lukes reaction it was FUN!
do hope that Vader is not the big threat in the world, with so many jedi (and what happend to the clones?)
it wouldent be a blood bath especially if he evades fighting anyone strong enough that could put him into the suit. It is worrying in some ways with Luke learning from Mace (vapad) even being around him will gain him some insight to Mace Windu's style and Leia being reletivly alone wuth Only Anakins as her teacher and Anakins position himself, He could become a serious threat.

and a big part of Sideous charecter was how sucsefull he was and how long he fought small mistakes that eventualy lead to his final true defeat after takeing a clone body of a younger him and haveing a jedi sacrifceing himself to take him down.
so him just dieing out is sucky.
Be sweet if Maul is still alive, that would make an intresting fighter.
A true sith not a jedi turned as vader and Dooku were(admitingly Sith came from jedi but that was a long time ago)
especially considering he would have gotten time and learning and instead of fighting a war witch would leave him exposed clock and dagger could make him a serious threat without the full numbers and powers of the jedi falling on him

Awesome! I love it and strongly encourage you to update soon!
Happy Trails
-Pegasusrider87

Great stuff. Nice you've brought the love interests in. Keep it up, please!

This story is amazing. The good flow of the plot and the fine sense of irony are awesome feats. But its special place under all of the Star Wars-Fanfiction is ensured by the way of incorporating the romance and family parts, without letting it fall into a sweat fluff piece (nothing is just well and awesome after Sidious is killed, the Skywalkers' marriage accepted whole heartly aso.)

My only point of critique is that at some point I had the impression, that you are progressing too fast in your descriptions, but I can't point out specific points, since I rushed through the story in one rush - makes obvious that it isn't of so much importance, is it?

Please continue

Thot

Right, of course Luke's attraction to Mara 'doesn't' have anything to do with it ;)

Great job! More soon, please!

I may have already said this, but I want to say that, while I don't love that you killed Padme, everything about this story is absolutely perfect.

this is a very impressive story. I'm really impressed with how you took the characters and incorporated the original universes facts within the context of your own. Great job with anakin's character as well as the twins. Keep up the great work!

Your title is misspelled. There is no word in English which is spelled "Inhexorable". You most likely mean "inexorable", meaning "impossible to stop or prevent."

It would behoove you to correct the misspelling ASAP; the title of a fic is the first thing anyone sees when considering whether or not to read it, and a blatant misspelling in the title doesn't reflect well on the rest of the fic overall. Basically, a prospective reader thinks, "if the author didn't bother to spell the title right, why should I bother slogging through the rest of a story that's probably got misspellings in it too?" Just FYI.