Another great one-shot. It really dives inside of Dusknoir and his personality and how and why some pokemon were driven to live in the darkness.

Fantastic Story.

-L.F.W.

so touching! you really did an amazing job!

Dusknoir...

That was really excellent, especially the ending! I loved it.

Only thing is, you described Dusknoir as having eyes, plural, instead of a single eye, and that kindof threw me off. XD;; Other than that, though, it was great!

...damn it, whenever I read fics like this I cry. (in a good way) It's so god...

I know this may sound a little much, but I actually teared up a little when reading this. It's very hard for me to tell if I truly hate Dusknoir, or if I feel sorry for him. The first time I played though special episode five, I teared up a little when Dusknoir disappeared. I remember when I talked with Dusknoir in the Town Square, and when he said that line to me. I was an Eevee, and my partner was a Riolu. I even have my own fan fiction couple for Dusknoir. His crush is a black winged unicorn named Midnight. I'm hoping to write my own version of special episode five with her in it.

"He kept his EYE locked with Grovyle's..." *shot* Kidding. XD

Love it, love it, love it. 3

And thank you for writing about Dusky~

*sighs* a very meaningful story, tells us how someone may choose to do bad things for their own sake, yet their final goal is actually the things he is destroying to achieve some sense of self-preservation.

anyways... this is a great story, makes the game more sensible, though i havent gotten to that part yet...

keep it up!_:):D

The Fanfictionlover

t-that was beutiful -siff-

Hey, I really enjoyed that! A lot of the stuff on this site is really painfully horrible, no plot or twists and awful grammer. But that was really amazing. It really made me see dusknoir in a different light. If it's not too much trouble, could you write a story with Chatot? There are no stories with him, and he's really my favourite in those games! If you really look into his personality, he's precious. Like when he took the hit for whatever-you-named-your-team (ginga-dan for me, I'm also obsessed with Team Galactic). I would really enjoy it if a good author were to write a story with him as the main character. Maybe from when he was an explorer with Wigglytuff? I'd write it myself, but I can't be bothered to make an acount (dial-up!). But anyway, well done! I think this is the longest review I've ever written!

Wonderful! I really liked the level of emotion in this. I got a bit welled up at the end, which isn't something I normally do when it comes to reading fanfic. It's an interesting theory on Dusknoir's though process and seems quite plausible.

This was an awesome story. It made me really want to cry. I love your PMD:Sky stories.