That was a crazy ride!
Awesome story...thanks for sharing!

The working if tye fidelus charm is given incorrectly. Ahrrybwas not the secret keeper, he only ahd been told the secret by the keeper. He could not bring anyone in at all as that would completely defeat teh purpose of it. Like for the Potters, all their friends knew the secret but only peter was the keeper. It would not make sense as they doubted Remus and. He could've brought voldy inside easily. In DH, the death eater were able to enter with harry because the fidelus was broken woth dumbledore's death.

Im really not all for the make past abusers life easy because... We share blood. That is the stupidest reason to abide by abuse. And a 26 yr old does not get intimidated when rebuked for cursing.

M - yay, goody goody! Definitely not too much (way to little in my opinion, but I know is a bitch about such - though there still are a good many M stories out there - yummy!

There really is no need for one more Harry/Draco-pairing. There is (much more than) enough. I mean almost ll slashers keep pusting Harry with Draco, Snape og Voldemort. I mean, come on, really? Snape? Voldemort? Draco i can see in some instances, but not the others. If Harry needs a grown man, Sirius is a much better alternative, or Bill, Barlien, Shacklebolt (or maybe Shacklebolts younger brother), Oliver Wood, Cedric or some unnamed or unmentioned older guys. All much better than Snivellous og Mouldyshorts. Or Steve Rogers, Capsicle! Yum!

Its funny how people see the relationships. I agere with HP/CD, Harry needs himself a handsome older boy! Harry/Ginny however, is just not on. At all. Ron/Hermione are loads better, but still not the best match. Bill/Fleur is a good match in my opinion, though Harry/Bill is good too:)

Haha! The wand on wand comment... In any other story it could only mean one thing.. But in Harry Potter.. The previously mentioned obvious thing, or actual -awkward- incounters where two people's wands accidentally touch. Haha! Oh my.. That could be taken badly.. Sorry this is somewhat long. Anyways.. The story is fantastic! You deserve an award. I'd never be able to write something like this.. Off topic again... Have a great day!

I’m very confused. There’s literally no mention of the people in the alternate universe before he ‘passes out and joins them’ so why is he suddenly best friends with them? The massive shift has left me confused as to why Harry would even entertain the muggles when he could just obliviate them and then get on a plane to the UK.
Also how would Cedric be his bonded when he was killed in the original timeline while he was still dating Cho?! Now all of a sudden he’s dating Harry with no explanation whatsoever. You can’t claim that Harry was in love with him when the guy died before any sort of relationship could take place.
A somewhat decent story but extremely confusing

I love Sirius' character, but if Harry had done more than piss and moan about how bad everything was and actually take some action against the Ministry and their corruption then perhaps Sirius would not only still be alive but also free. Harry has knowledge for numerous other magical governments and instead of asking them for aid and bringing them into the issue with Voldy and the corrupt ministry all he did is piss and moan about his bad luck and how terrible his life, honestly I am sick and tired of the stupid questions about "How are you still sane" and how terrible Harry had it. He has the chance to do everything over and make billions of lives better and instead all we hear about is his poor me bullshit.

I don't know if you keep Jiro around so you have someone to hate on or if you have some plan for him, but this bs is getting ridiculous either get rid of his character, change it or stop being an ass about how he acts. Harry attacked Draco for far less in their time at Hogwarts.

It is ridiculous that Jiro is punished because Matt cannot control his responses and act like an adult he is the one that attacked Jiro first and if anyone is to be punished it should be him, and threatening Jiro for attacking a Muggle with his fists is stupid he did not use magic Harry is the one that used magic against the muggle, and just because someone says something does not mean they caused it so that excuse that you added into the parentheses is pathetic. These males are adults and should start acting like it!

So... I stopped in chapter 7 because suddenly it seems that I missed half of the story, I got to the ending of chapter 5 with Harry knocked out after something strange in Winky and see in chapter 6 him talking with someone that suddenly appear in the story like nothing, they are best pals and whatever happened, I don't know, and the continuation did not have that much sense.

WTF, with the oddball, long, drawn out cross-overs? Billy the Kid was easier to understand than Avatar that you are now spending hundreds of thousands of words on.

I was never sure why Harry didn't mention "Voldemort is back" while under the effects of truth serum in court (several chapters ago), or give the scene during pensieve testimony.

Other than Albus and Hermione, the story is thrilling so far. Albus and Hermione are more aggravating than usual in this story, and that's saying a lot, since they always are pains in the butt.