| Reviews for The Path That We Must Choose |
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laurajustin chapter 11 . 11/4/2018 Great story! Can't wait for the next update! |
Prophet19 chapter 11 . 5/9/2018 Given it has been four years since you've updated I assume that like me you are on hiatus from writing, or you are no longer active on this site. Still...Its a shame this story has come to an end, as it is among the best of the AU type stories I've read, and has so much potential for what can happen with Team Seven, the rest of the Rookie Nine plus Team Gai, and the world in general. On a 'critical' note, as I try to make these reviews more than just "Gosh so good!" I've noticed few errors in grammar or syntax, and the writing itself flows well from scene to scene. That said, there are a few punctuation errors. I might also suggest adding a few small details into scenes, essentially just being slightly more descriptive. Thank you for the interesting read. |
the white wolf Haruka chapter 11 . 12/3/2015 LOVED it! Can't wait till next chapter! ! :) :) |
Sakura Sayuki Fuyama chapter 11 . 7/17/2015 Please hug meeeeee. Your story is GOALS. |
Sevvus chapter 11 . 4/9/2015 I love this.. admittedly I was wanting to switch to a different story at one point but(I wasn't bored... and I like how you wrote it..I just.. it didn't have my full interest, and another in my tabs sounded more fun at the time..), as swoon as Kakashi called them HIS kids ...I was sucked back in so fast I almost fell off my bed from the change to my equilibrium! not to mention the whiplash... lol that sentence was like..the best sentence I've read ever...and I'm honestly not sure why it got me so bad, but it did and im very much hooked. so! I how you update soon! please and thank you! |
Shadowmage97 chapter 10 . 7/21/2014 Will you update anytime soon? |
Lauri3n chapter 10 . 3/20/2014 This is great! |
duchessme chapter 10 . 9/6/2013 funny and wait to know their next punishments! |
I see you see chapter 10 . 8/22/2013 Lol awesome chapter can't wait for the next one |
Immortal.Sailor.Cosmos chapter 9 . 6/27/2013 Hey, I saw a couple of little errors, not bad. Up at the top you're missing a "it" here- you'll regret (it,) you hear me?" The Fifth Hokage also, where Tsunade realizes Sakura doesn't know, you have "heart" and "eyes" when you need only one, I'd suggest you keep "heart" it keeps the tone better. I'm on mobile, so this was the best editorial review I can do, usually when I do review-edits I have the story open as I read it for the first time & a separate window with the review & I edit as I go, but mobile doesn't let you do that. & my spellcheck when funny recently & isn't working as well as it used to. I'm so glad you updated! In fact I was so happy, I had to delay reading so that I wouldn't reread the whole story again just because & then fail my two classes because of homework neglect. |
Shinobi of life chapter 8 . 6/23/2013 it really funny if the D rank missions become B class missions by "accident" XD |
Immortal.Sailor.Cosmos chapter 3 . 7/11/2012 in the last part of this chapter, and the first half of that chapter you have "he" instead of "she" for Tayuya, but I didn't notice the switch until after I reviewed that chapter, so I'm telling you this chapter. |
Immortal.Sailor.Cosmos chapter 4 . 7/11/2012 I just noticed something, on what, my third reread of this story? Yeah, Tayuya is a chick. With Uzumaki red hair, although I don't remember if she's a confirmed Uzumaki. |
Crystalzap chapter 4 . 7/3/2012 you do know that Naruto and Sasuke should have easily brought that witch down. as one of each the rookies went one on one with the sound four and won but all lasted till back up... and Sasuke and Naruto were the strongest of them |
Lauri3n chapter 7 . 11/29/2011 This is awesome! |