Wow, I really enjoyed this story. Deliciously dark! Thanks for writing!

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That was, to paraphrase Ollivander in PS, a great story. Chilling, but great.

Absolutely brilliant.

Excellent fic

I almost give up your fanfic because I thought it was an another Ginny!bashing but I think you raised some interesting view on her. Ginny's link with Tom was never brought up again but it's not stupid to say there is a connexion between her feelings for Harry and Tom's obsession for him.

Hermione is very dangerous but she's over-reacting. This is not her business and when she acted like this with Marietta, Umbridge and Skeeter it was directly connected with her or the safety of her friend.

Strangely, I think Hermione could have this behaviour with Malefoy and I never understand why people ship them. He's a spoiled racist brat and he put all the school in danger. They almost died because of him. Dark!Hermione will crush him not fuck him.

Good story.

Huh. Not how I would interpet hermione, but I like your depiction of her nonetheless :D

Oh, I loved this. I feel like this is a beautiful rendition of Hermione; powerful, intelligent, loyal, and ruthless.

My opinion of this Hermione...obsessed much? This drifts into psychological torture more than anything. I see where she's coming from but she's taking it all way too personally which is extremely unhealthy.

Plus wouldn't Harry be better off if she waited until after the divorce to torture GinGin? I mean, now he's going to be stuck with a catatonic wife, won't he? He needs to be free to marry Luna...

I don't think I have ever loved a Dark Hermione fic more! The calculated revenge is entirely too beautiful for words!

holeymoley your hermione is excellent

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I enjoyed your post-story musings as much as the story itself. A Hermione who is darker than canon is appealing and makes sense to me.

Since when is wanting to be a successful person and not wanting to be a house wife a crime?

So Hermione is punishing Ginny for the thought of entertaining that she be valued as her own person on the basis of her own merits rather than being values as the Boy-Who-Lived's wife?

Frankly, I cannot agree with the idea of punishing Ginny for being her own person and wanting to be successful.

Very wicked. I love it! I almost want to read Harry’s point of view as if he suspects and approves. For the witch who never left him, I think he’d understand. Good job on making your reader think hard.