aw, that was cute! Simple and enjoyable. That game they were playing sounded like fun. Is it a real game?
Was the fear of losing true love Kairi's fear?

loved it :D

WOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
BEST. EVAH!
I've read some KingdomHrts fix, but this 1 was just SO amazing. Thanks you a million times over for this. :3
I shall read it every halloween!(and a few times in between)

THIS, is amazing! So perfect in like every way!
LOVE it!

the thing with KH is that Yaoi is kind of an underlining of the sub-plot, people going all over the universe-literally, to get their friends back. the thing with sora and riku is that Sora reacts more when finding Riku then Kairi, i mean he BROKE DOWN CRYING when he found riku in Xemnas' body ut found it awkward when the girl he supposedly had a crush on hugged him?! and then there is the tension between Axel and Roxas which Axel was the main reason for because of his disney Fluff coated lines which were put into a context to make it seem like he actually LOVED roxas, even without a heart that isn't broken(because like demyx, i believe they still have hearts!)

so basicly, Square enix is giving Yaoi fangirls their much Needed canon Fanservice with Bishies, while using Disney's lines as a cover for the dramatic effect, because seriously KH is like an Adventure/fantasy Drama! XD

sorry for ranting
-KS

the only other person who cold wear that dress like sora did would be Roxas cuz they're each others other half...Riku and Axel are also pretty similar even though they aren't the other's other half... (E.G: lover,green eyes, a little too cocky, guys XD, popular characters,fangirls, fanclubs, personalities kinda)

Wow! Best RiSo fic ever! Great style, every no oocness, very sexy, epic!

LOVED IT! Perfect Halloween treat! ) The detail was perfect and so was the length. Kudos!

This fic was so Hot! I completely love it and I love the idea of Sora as Alice and Riku as the Mad Hatter. This story was perfect! Well to me anyway XD.

Brilliant. Freaking brilliant. I ADORED it. :)

That was good! I liked it. I loved your use of descriptive words in place of a load of swear words. It really changes the atmosphere of the story. It makes Riku seem relatively normal, not a rapist.. I like this one.

i'm glad that Riku was having fun with the Gatekeeper game. go Sora for being fake drunk. yeah the ending was very cute. loved it. keep up the good work and do your best.

it's fun to dress up on Halloween. That was really neat how Kairi knows when Riku was feeling down. Riku as the Mad Hatter is awesome. cool how Kairi was the Cheshire Cat and Sora was Alice. that was awesome of her to do that. lol no how Riku is looking at Sora in a different light. i want to see them in a drawing with the Alice in Wonderland outfits. Riku i think was doing this for you. on i can't wait to read more of this. lol on this chapter.

mega hot story *nosebleed* 100/100

totally wonderful! :D