Reid sure does get kidnapped a lot. Poor baby!

I'm sorry and I know this is nitpicky but I can't help it, once again I'm sorry I just thought maybe you would like to know since in this chapter you never said if Spencer was moved to a regular hospital room or if he was still in ICU by the time Jack visited, but I recall from when my grandma was in the ICU many years ago that children under I want to say maybe 10 aren't allowed to be in the ICU like at all they can sit in the waiting room but they're not allowed to go back there and if I recall correctly I think only 3 people at a time are allowed back in ICU to visit at a time. Once again I'm sorry I know I'm nitpicking but it's late and I need to get to bed so it's probably just me babbling again I'm sorry sorry love this story.

Ugh this was amazing and sad and awesome and beautiful and well done and ughhhh

So I don’t even use this account for writing anymore, it’s all from when I was like 11 it 12 lol. But I had to let you know how sad this story is, it’s well done it’s just so sad. I can feel Reid’s terror and I know the BAU is doing everything they can but why haven’t they found him yet? I just feel so horrible for him and no one should go through what he has. I don’t want him to be alone either. Even though it’s breaking my heart thank you for writing this.

Such a great master piece! It had me glued to my screen for 3.5 consecutive hours! Keep writing, no need to not use a perfectly amazing gift!

Not even halfway through the first chapter and this is already a favorite! From the great family humor to the promising unsub... God, I love you! :P

Hey, thanks for posting this story. I very much enjoyed your case and of course the Reid Whumpage. I especially liked that you did not have any of the team standing in as Reid's psychologist. It is clear in the show that they all are sane and use the staff psychologist to help themselves. So thanks for that. Liked also that the main antagonist bled out rather than dying on the spot.

This made me cry so hard for Spencer, and it made me laugh with the antics between the team. They are perfect. I love how you included Gideon and Elle. You made me cry so hard. I literally wanted to kill the brothers for daring to hurt such a cutie pie! Grrrr. The best though was the shopping ... I love shopping! This was one of my favorite fics. So glad I read it. Brilliantly written, not too short, not too long, not too wordy. In short it was perfect. Brilliant job. Just brilliant. The ending made me laugh. The beginning and middle made me cry. Actually, the ending also made me cry. My gut literally twisted when I read your descriptions of the torture. Very creative MO by the way. You don't really have to make up new ways to torture the man, but you also have to compile the cases the BAU suffered the most and intertwine them in a logical way. That must have taken a long time. Thanks for writing this. I absolutely love it.

This was Genius! This is what fanfiction should be!

Omgosh. ... i just read ALL 15 chptrs. WOW ! LOVED THIS STORY :)
The way you wrote EACH characters & their emotional roller coaster ride, even bringing Elle & Gideon back to help... absolutely believable & drew me in like a hurricane. ! I couldn't believe that you were able to get 15 chapters out of this. .. until i got to the end and was wanting even more ! You took me thru so many twist & turns, ups & downs... i thought i might actually pass out from holding my breath. I am now going to look & see what else you have written. I loved every moment of this (good or bad) and think you could have a great career writing. Keep up the good work & KEEP BEING CRIMINALLY MINDED !

Wow. That was an amazing ending...

a little bit of me is dead

I like how the warning is "contains non-consensual homosexual intercourse" and then there's like no mention of the physical and psychological torture. It's really great though. I just get a kick out of it every chapter.

THIS. IS. OFFICIALLY. MY. FAVOURITE. STORY.
YOU'RE A GENIUS!

Such and angst-ridden and horrific story. Poor everyone, bit, especially, Reid. I'm glad he has such a fantastic support system to help him recover, though it will take a long time for him to get over everything - some of it will surely stick with him his whole life.

You did a thorough job of making this as brutal as possible while still allowing for a happy ending. I'm not sorry at all that the three brothers are dead.

(I actually read the uncut version on adultfanfiction dot net, but the review button wouldn't work \ so I found you here.)