Awwww

"Trouble in Paradise?" the redhead asked, turning around to face the way she came.

"Yup."

After a moment, Nao asked, "Wanna go get some ice cream?"

"Sure why not."

lol, I laughed out loud at this! :P

Hahaha, that was awesome to read. Especially with the "I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU!" From Shizuru. That just made me burst out laughing and holding my sides.

Oh, and the "Trouble in Paradise?" From Nao was also hilarious. Man, Natsuki is goin' to be buried ten feet under the ground soon.

But she might've deserved that for not thinking it was special. Still, this is unbelievably good.

XD This story rocks!

This was absolutely perfect! i like the concept so very much. Thank you.

Lol, that was good! I like how Shizuru's version was all so romantic, and when Natsuki's turn came up... LOL! That's so very like them. Good job!

LOL... Natsuki so deserved that! XD - being mean xP

After all, we all know Shizuru thinks way more complexly than Natsuki does! Complex things hurt Natsuki's little head! Har har har XD

In my opinion, that was a very good way to view how the "garden" scene/Natsuki/Shizuru's thoughts about each other :D

I think it was perfect. And sweet.

Hehe. Alyssa... XD *gives her an icecream*

i think its a good take on natsuki's perpective, in my mind i dnt fink Natsuki is the 'love at first sight' type, more a 'grow to love someone' type of person. plus she had why too much on her plate at the time.

but lol at shizuru's reaction and Alyssa is a real trouble maker in this isn't she? hahaha

Wahhaahahahaha. Good humour!

That was short and sweet. Love how Alyssa replied 'Trouble in paradise' to Nao lolz. Good story

Liked all the thoughts Shizuru had. Laughed at Natsuki's thoughts. Hope you decide to do another one-shot showing when Natsuki realized her feeling for Shizuru to make it up to her.

That's Natsuki for you, ever the romantic. Good story!

-Urban C.

I think it was a very nice Shiznat...and a great way to start a day

poor natsuki! her obliviousness or should I say insensitivity earned her 'whatever' (e.g. punishment) from shizuru! well, she is just being honest in answering alyssa's question. yeah! she should blame alyssa for that! I like the hilarity in the end!

this story cracked me up xD!

Interesting POV's.

Haahahah Natsuki is in big trouble now.