You know what's pretty cool? I literally read this fic before reading Maximum Ride. It was just in someone's favorites, and I was like "oh, cool, looks like a neat story," and that's what got me to read the books. I'm excited to re-read it now having read the books. So far, I think JP's voice was captured well! :)

wimp.

O.o

bang. you have been shot.

kill her off... big bird killed her.

ahem excuse me it is lAs vegas, not lOs vegas

O.o hmm well that turns out to be more then just "friends"…
(ps i have read this before [pps i have no life {ppps im a loser}])

Hello, James Patterson here.
I would just like to say that this story is marvelous. The way you portray Max and Fang's love is just like the way I wanted it in the books, and I love how Nudge is more of a subtle character, but she is definitely there in all of her ranting glory.
Please keep blessing Fanfiction with your wonderful work, Nightwings93.
Fly on, James Patterson

Seriously fricking Lissa

Gazzy's a lil' kiddo.

Just sayin'.

WOW! This was such a good story! I know it's 2017 but this story was so DAMN good! I freaking loved it so much... I always felt like I was there with them, I could feel what they were feeling... I loved how you had cute cliche couple moments, but also moments where they would just rough house it, or hang with friends. I feel like you portrayed the characters beautifully. This story has it all. Fax. Humor. Romance. Drama. I could go on an on. I hope that you are still on fan fiction and would love to read more fax stories by you. BYYYEEEE

Still reading this in 2017. That's how great it is!

AWWW LOVE

noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.

whhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyy