| Reviews for Sandman |
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   hitorikitefa8 chapter 1 . 3/24/2018 Excellent story thank you for writing it |
| woofyy chapter 1 . 3/16/2017 Nice story :) good luckies with your future stories :) |
| i love okikagu chapter 1 . 12/14/2015 so cute and lovely thanks |
| ahsoei chapter 1 . 4/11/2014 I just don't get about the title. Why 'sandman'? |
| Bloody masterpeace chapter 1 . 5/22/2013 Oh that horny horny teenage boy and that pitifully Innocent girl...Oh ho I wish I had her innocence *insert D. Grayman joke here* |
| Totoro504 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010 Oh Okita, you should never say you're gonna have her on her knees. It makes me think of perverted things...Literally. Anyways, this was great. Thanks for writing it. |
| C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only chapter 1 . 11/9/2010 Wait 'til the others find them in the morning... |
| cherryblossoms4spring chapter 1 . 8/15/2010 okita is such a perve lol |
| hallioe chapter 1 . 12/30/2009 M, delicious fluffy ending :D I loved Okita in this, seemed really in character as much as he could be, favourite line was definitely: “Oi China, if you don’t wake up I’ll molest you.” Paha, and loved the banter as soon as Kagura woke up. |
| ChOFee chapter 1 . 12/26/2009 Nice one *grins like some Cheshire cat* I really liked how you wrote Okita's POV, that slight, unconscious denial rules XD |
| RenjiLuvah chapter 1 . 12/1/2009 Ooh ooh I like this! The devious Okita who has found a defense-less sleeping Kagura tries to write on her face and instead, becomes distracted and it ends up taking some whole other turn! Nice! And there's a small typo. You wrote at the end "A paused" and I'm sure you meant, "A pause". Other than that, nice job! And Kagura- threatening to kill ppl but totally missed that knees pun bc she's still innocent in a lot of ways. :3 Haha gold. Oh, I love Kagura. A child and a force to be reckoned with all at the same time. |
| The Pinball Wizard chapter 1 . 11/15/2009 Sandman. The title should be Sandman. Excellent job btw. The characters were pretty well in character! :D |
| nondescriptface chapter 1 . 11/15/2009 'With a gleam in his eye, Okita closed the space between them, kissing her quickly, “You win for now China, but I’ll have you on your knees before you see what’s coming.” And when he said knees, he literally meant on her knees. The thought alone was enough to make Okita lick his lips.' MY FAVOURITE PART ;DD probably cuz i'm dirty (oh yea) I ESPECIALLY love how clueless Kagura is after. $$ and I totally understand how you have to make them sort of OOC cuz well, it's sougo and kagura...haha it was great! keep writing! |
