Epic. First rate. This was my second reading, and it was even better than the first time.

wow that's amazing. the fact that now Kim has powers of her own...i hope no bad guys try anything anytime soon. Ron stepped up again v i love it when that happens. just a great story! awesome!

i got really worried at first! I really believed Ron was going to have to kill Kim, but thank god he didn't!

I think you did a really super job on this, keep up the good work! :)

Kim and Ron finally defeat Kaji, then Sensei and Yori become the distraction to the power.

Although it's very unlikely, I swear that you ended the story with the possibility of a sequel. Anyway, This was a great story, sad to see it end.

A beautiful ending to a great story.

General Quin.

But unless they know the truth, the balance is a lie.

Be interesting to see if the Blade when called would split for the two.

LFTM of your stories

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JIm

That was an awesome story! It kept my attention the whole time. Very well written!

Balance indeed.

I wonder how long Sensei's deduction about the sword and their benefactors will be figured out by Kim and Ron...

Time will tell.

Nice little tale there. Glad to see it.

CajunBear73

Great story. It was fun reading it. Fantastic work.

I really enjoyed the whole story. Nice conclusion- give those two the chance to find the right path when one does not exist and they will... Although I suspected the prophecy would turn the way it did- the monkey and dragon fighting together (could there have been any other way with Kim & Ron?), no one could have ever predicted the journey you took our heroes- and us- on, and it was a great ride.

I really appreciate integration of canon characters with OC's. Also great use of involving past events with this story. Both add weight and credibility to the whole premise of your story.

Lastly, love the vignette of Monkeyfist/DNAmy at the end. It sounds like she finally gets her monkeyman- "I'm not really a cuddler..." Oh wow, too funny...

Looking forward to the next time...

This was a very interesting conclusion to your tale. It seems that when you give these two a choice between two bad things they always come up with a better alternative.

Nicely done!

Love the irony with Yamanouchi's new role, heh. :)

A fitting end, good job!

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Mike.

O.o...Wow! Definitely something I didn't see coming! I can't wait to see what will happen next! Hopefully Kim will be alright with all of the power!

Leave it to Team Possible to find an alternative to the very dangerous sitch they find themselves in.

Bim, Bum, Bum, Bum, Bum