| Reviews for A Tentative Beginning |
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PrayerGirl chapter 1 . 12/2/2013 Cute! |
TheLadyW chapter 1 . 11/17/2011 I find this scene quite charming. Thank you for sharing it. |
disneyqueen chapter 1 . 8/6/2010 Hi, That was a great one-short. You captured Belle's pov very well. And I loved how you made her afraid of his reaction to the snowball, but then relaxed her fear when she saw the beast wasn't angry. Wonderful job and keep up the good work. D-Queen (P.S I was wondering if you had time if you could check out my story, Little Rose Bloom to read and review. Thanks) Again keep up the great work. |
Natalie9653 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010 That is soooo cute! I love the unexpected situation of her on top of him. Great job! |
C.T. 127 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010 Lovely and heartwarming. I wouldn't mind reading the entire movie, if you wrote it out like this scene. |
Lala Sharada chapter 1 . 1/25/2010 WOW! This was great! You described the emotions perfectly and with a skilled hand. Its very well written. I wish I could describe emotions like you do. Well, practice makes perfect, I guess. |
SamoaPhoenix9 chapter 1 . 11/12/2009 Cute. A nice insight into Belle's thoughts while the snowball fight is going on. This little shot makes sense, and it sounds like her voice. My favorite part is where she realizes she isn't afraid of the Beast anymore. Some of the sentances are a tad wordy, but that's my only objection. Well done. |
Pimpernel Princess chapter 1 . 11/11/2009 This was lovely-I especially enjoyed how you captured the Beast's boyish sense of fun. It's a delightful contrast with the Beast that picks up Belle and rushes back into the castle. Wonderfully written. |