I'm in love with rabastan

A cliffhanger! Lucius is full of lies! It would be nice if you completed this fic.
I want to know what happens next.

Oh boy! He carved his initials into her arm.
Your story is inspired from "Eden" by obsessmuch, isn't it?
Anyway, it's interesting...

very good...looking forward to more

Oh boy oh boy oh boy

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY. YOU ARE LEAVING IT AT SUCH A TANTALISING SPOT. PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE THIS ABANDONED. IT'S TOO GOOD.

Oh. My. GOD. Okay this has been my favourite chapter so far! I love this Rabastan/Hermione/Lucius dynamic. I like that you made Rabastan trust his brother enough to take Hermione over to him and show her branding. Nice touch! Speaking of touch... I guess now Hermione and Rabastan can't get it smexxxy now without Hermione hurting.

Hmm... once Lucius becomes more possessive of Hermione he probably won't like Rabastan carrying out such intimate duties will he...

This was a really great first chapter! I feel hooked onto the premise already. :) I see you haven't updated in over a year and that this is incomplete... I do hope inspiration reaches you soon! xx

Je reviens en arrière pour pouvoir poster : pitié, poursuivez votre histoire, elle est absolument géniale ! Elle en vaut vraiment la peine...
S'il vous plaît, continuez à écrire !

I'm absolutely gutted that this was abandoned, it was excellent and riveting. Such an awful shame, I hope you come back to it (pretty pretty please?)

I had shivers reading the end of this chapter, it was so terrifying and powerful!

Very dark and honestly a little sickening, but in a good way...if that makes sense? I can never resist a truly dark Death Eater story and who better to fill it than the luscious Lucius ;) dying to see where it goes...kinda like Hermione (yeah, I know that was atrocious, lol)

it is an interesting story. It would be really great if you could update this. I wanted to know how this ends