Soooo cute at the end. Ok I will say that Roxas was a little too crazy for my liking but, good story.

love it

So the dad was an extreme right wing but he had no issues screwing his son?

Very good thought up story. Kinda weird at the begging but it got a lot better. Good Job!

oh Roxas you so crazy

if i every find Axel i would

be very tempted to chain him up :)

good story

xox Dipshit

Awwww that was soooo cyute! I love it! Crazy roxas! haha!

lol for Roxas as a creeper...but it's really deep and the characters are complex. This is really well done :)

Okay, I read the first couple of chapters and was like, what the hell? Time went on and I started loving it. Regardless, this was an extremely cute story, even though Roxy is nuts. I loved it. Your descriptions of life on the farm were fun to read. I'm glad that I clicked on it, and I'm sad that it's over. Thank you for writing this!

Wow... This story was intense. I don't know if this was meant to happen, but I admit I was laughing all too hard during the first chapter. The roles were utterly switched. Roxas is the psycho and Axel is the sane and friendly one. Refreshing.

My only complaint is during the chapter where Roxas goes and repairs the little ring... I was freaking out. I felt like Axel should have been more furious about the whole thing. I mean... He was chained to a wall in a stalker's basement for a long long time... I'm pretty sure he would have gone through momentary madness. I think you could have worked on Axel's emotional side more for sure. He was just too... ready for everything.

I loved the crazy Roxas though. Your writing is nice too. I love how you backed up everything with research. It looks like a lot of time was invested in getting everything to fit together. Well done!

:D I liked it

This is so touching ;w;

When I saw chapter 11's name, I was like, "OH NOES, A TWIST?"

but great job overall, very nice, keep up the great work

:3

yay cute chappy but aww its over D: i hope there will be a sequel!

All together now, "Aw!"

Extremely cute but quite startling in the begginning. I never really saw Roxas as a top before but it was something different. Nice job. Brought back memories of My Sad Life.

Aw cute ending!

NO! ITS OVER!