Sweet and fun :)

Awww, what a sweet story. Harley is in fact the TR version of May's life: No matters how he tries to be bad with her, she always find the way to learn about his pranks.

Awesome story! Can you make a sequel where May defeats Harley with her new Tentacool?

Haha you should make a sequel to this it would be hilarious to actually read what the battle would be like.

This was awesome! I can really see this happening in the anime, Harley getting her a Tentacool as a present...! xD I hope you end up writing a sequel, even though this story is pretty old. You did a great job with this!

You could have drawn it out into at least another chapter by having May gradually come to like her new Tentacool. I'd very much enjoy it if it was so since your writing and character interactions were so great.

Haha! He'll be surprised, all right. His own gift will be used against him! Love this fic! Super awesome.

This thing looks as if it has no point otheer than getting May a tentacool.

Well, it does seem like it needs either a new chapter or a sequal...

Still, good story, thought for a moment that Tentacool was going to Tentacle rape her or something... c:

i hope you do a sequal to this story it was great and you kept the characters the same it was awesome

Awesome. I love you for making a story about Harley's friendship with Haruka :D (I mean May xD) Hello Arysd by the way! :D It's been a while . *waves*

I thought May hated Tentacools because of what happened when she was like 6. Lmao. Harley is so weird. :) Cute.

I liked this story, (Y) Well done! You never cease to impress me ;)

Hahahaha! Harley's just the best. Possibly the best prank he's ever pulled!

It's really well written, and you kept both characters in character, too! Awesome stuff! _

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You know, this is a great story, pretty creative. Its really a great idea! And btw, about your other story, i think Drew should give May something rare, whatever it is. )

This story is really good and the end bit made me laugh because you could tell she was not happy about the pokemon she had been giving but she will still use it anyway to beat Harley and wipe the smile from his face.

I can't wait for you to updated it so please do it soon and I will review again.

Til Next Time

Queensunset