Reviews for An Unnamed Revelation
pdljmpr6 chapter 3 . 5/31/2010
Nice tie in to the david jobs! And glad eliot finally flew into a rage Sophie, tho i still think she got off a bit easy. Lol. And so glad Father Paul showed back up, eliot needed that.

Ive been reading this series for 5 straight hours, btw. Its 1am. Thanks for that. Lol.

Pj
pdljmpr6 chapter 2 . 5/31/2010
Oh man, Eliot is gong to make himself sick with all this worrying and rollarcoaster romance stuff. Your writing remains beyond brillant and your raw, real, unbeleivably accurate and sensative portrayal of every aspect of this relationship continues to blow my mind. I cant help thinking Eliot needs some support in this, i hope u bring Hardison or somebody into the next chap. Damn. This is out of control, what are hey gonna do?

Pj
pdljmpr6 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Not a oneshot. Interesting. Gotta say, eliots blow up and sbsequent reveal to Hardison were quite possibly my favorite moment from his fic so far. Mostly, i think, because i feel like Eliot deserves to be able to go into a fit of rage right now and he needs outside support feom as many ppl as he can get it bcuz he aint gettin it from Nate.

Pj
ShadowWolfDagger chapter 3 . 11/21/2009
Awesome ending to this story of your series, I loved it, can't wait for the next one _

~Tala-Paige~
ASiriuslyGleekyTimeLord chapter 3 . 11/20/2009
When can we expect a sequel? I really liked the end to this, but I would have liked to see Eliot go after Sophie a little more at the end because, while Nate does have a problem, I side with Eliot on the whole putting him into rehab before he was ready for it.

I wanna see their relationship through the Davids' jobs. Can't wait for more!
ShadowWolfDagger chapter 2 . 11/16/2009
Awesome update once again, please update it soon _

~Tala-Paige~
ASiriuslyGleekyTimeLord chapter 2 . 11/15/2009
Who's Eliot calling? Sophie? Hardison? Parker? I'm hoping it's one of the latter two because I don't think Sophie's going to take too kindly to the fact that Nate drank himself to the point that he had a seizure and almost died. In fact, I wouldn't put it past Sophie to blame Eliot for letting Nate drink that much, even though there really wasn't anything Eliot could do. But Sophie would blame him anyway because that's the way she is and...you made me rant about Sophie...wow, no one has ever made me do that before!

I love this story...WAIT! I THINK I KNOW WHO HE'S CALLING! Yeah, I know, ADD right? Is he calling Father Paul? I bet he's calling Father Paul! Why didn't I think of that one before! I mean, you have Father Paul in almost everything, except for this story so far!

Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
Keyanna chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
If you've already finished all three parts, I can't wait until you post the rest, and if you are still in the process of writing, I wish you lots of luck and speed!

I am glad that Hardison found out about their relationship, even though Eliot didn't mean to let it slip. Hardison's probably the best person on the team to provide emotional support (since Sophie's ruled out because of her feelings for Nate), and Eliot in particular needs all the support he can get right now. And Hardison had a good point there about Eliot's use of the computer geek stereotype. I think he'll be a good friend to have on their side.
ShadowWolfDagger chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
UH! This one is three chapters...coolness _

Hardison now knows...wonder how long he'll be able to keep without letting something out about it...even if it is something that no one -cough-Sophie-cough- will notice ;]

Can't wait to read more and see how this one will turn out. Please update it soon D

~Tala-Paige~