| Reviews for Where you belong |
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Janet Garrett chapter 10 . 2/1/2019 I know that late is an understatement for me to be reading this story, but in any case I usually wait until I have read about 8-10 chapters to determine if I want to continue . Lets just say I know what Bella is feeling when you love someone but you refuse to give in or up to the possibility of complete happiness with someone you hurt her beyond reason...but I think she will, the KISS says it all. She loves him. |
shannon30033 chapter 31 . 1/1/2019 Well, that was very good..I loved your story, characters and their journeys. Thank you for sharing them. |
shannon30033 chapter 17 . 1/1/2019 Your break-up scene was done so well. I still like both characters and they still broke up. I do like the parallel book-action with Edward saving her with the car... |
shannon30033 chapter 4 . 1/1/2019 This story is fun, too. good plot and nice build-up. I like the flashbacks. |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/23/2018 THe dreams are crap and the writing is all over the place |
rjh1960 chapter 22 . 2/12/2018 Bella needs to let Edward know that Tanya needs to be fired. Enough is enough. As for James she needs to tell her Dad and Riley. |
rjh1960 chapter 8 . 2/12/2018 Cute story Bella needs to move on Edward sounds like he has issues Riley seems great |
Guest chapter 9 . 1/24/2018 Did I mention that this story has ALOT of grammar issues? There has been several mistakes in each chapter so far. They make your characters come off as stupid. One or two I can understand but there's SO MANY! Its things like " I saw Edward last night, we TALK" or "I want go to dinner"...Didn't you edit? |
Guest chapter 8 . 1/24/2018 Bella is already falling for Edward again...and hes there with Tanya. Bella is a fucking moron. You don't take back the asshole that left you at the alter. EVER! |
Jean Driver chapter 31 . 1/2/2018 Wonderful story! Really hope you keep at it! For a first effort, you sure did a wonderful job and I felt like you captured the spirit of Edward and Bella and friends perfectly! Thank you so much for your story! |
NeeNee246 chapter 31 . 7/28/2017 OMG! It's over and I am going to absolutely miss them. I can't turn the page and read more. It's over. It's ended. Or maybe, it's just their beginning! This is a fantastic story! Thank you for sharing this with us! ;) |
NeeNee246 chapter 30 . 7/28/2017 I love this chapter! ;) I was feeling a bit more sad for Bella more than I probably should have been, especially with her walking down the isle with Edward. I think the sad or even angry feelings would have definitely surfaced at that point. I am sad that there is only one more chapter to read! :( |
NeeNee246 chapter 29 . 7/27/2017 This is really fantastic! Weddings, babies...happiness! ;) |
NeeNee246 chapter 28 . 7/27/2017 WOW! This was so emotional! I love this! :) |
NeeNee246 chapter 27 . 7/27/2017 OHFORTHELOVEOFCHEESEANDCRACKERS! LOL I love this and I am so happy to be reading this completed or I would probably have to freak out a bit more than I already am! LOL;) |