That was a very interesting little twist at the end there D

Though who wouldn't be in love with Qui-Gon

I'm gonna attach this story to one of my QuiObi drawings on DA, just because I love your story so much. Don't worry, I gave you full credit, for your awesomeness. If you want me to take it down, just let me know.

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Le SMEX!~ Amazing, wonderful and drool worthy. I will read it many a time.

The story is very catching, your style easy to read - and you use excellent imagery, I envy you for that ! You do have a few faults, a missing komma here, a typo there, but nothing disturbing at all. The flashbacks and flash...forth ? are a bit confusing at first but since they pop up in the same sequence all the time you end up following pretty well and it adds to the plot. And ha ! I love the ending XD I just KNEW it

"wondering how one determined woman could fix something that seemed so big and unsolvable in less than an hour." I picked up the hint about women there :p

["No, Qui-Gon. Not Obi-Wan. It was you. I'm in love with you."]

And who wouldn't be in love with Qui-Gon... *drool*

Oh wow, what a wicked twist there at the end! Very awesome story! LUVED IT!

Ga! I love it so much! Your descriptions were wonderful, yet painful. Beautiful, yet striking. I enjoyed every sentence, no matter how much it hurt me.

Love it so much. This is SO on my favorites!

oh noo! you can't leave me there! i'm hangin here. hangin! *throws hands up in exasperation* you have to continue. you just have to! (do i sound like i'm pleading? while i am! i don't care how demeaning it is i am BEGGING you to continue)

ah! that's so great! I think you should right more because Obi/Qui ROCKS! lol...heh

Aaaahhhhh! Brill surprise ending! Is there more? Great story- I'm all emotional now!

Ooh...The plot thickens...I'll be waiting for an update, hope you write more.

never have i liked such pairings ;) but this is beautifully written and i need to read the next chapter!

~stormy1325

WOW! That was GREAT! And the little twist at the end! WHOO HOO!

Only just got round to reading this... I don't know what's wrong with the SW fandom - why aren't hungry hordes slavering for more of your stuff? I found the jumping around in time a bit jarring, but that's about all. Very nice - it made me want to go read the PWPs all over again.

I read this before but didn't review. I hope you plan on finishing this, I'd kind of like to know what happens. Your conveyance of emotions in your writing is very well done, and I hope to see more of your stories.