You'd figure that Amelia would have protections in place from her position or would have peripheral awareness of suspected death eaters. It does fit with a backwards society to not be prepared for terrorism.

I assume eating bits of Riddle gives him an either an edge, which is positive, or makes Harry a little darker, which may be a positive. Could be why she's excluding Basilisk Venom.

Etna with the plans. I dont get what they are doing with the items. From my understanding of disagea, the game revolves around battling inner demons or flaws of an item and when you beat a bunch of levels the item improves. The glove Etna got them to improve as well as other items aren't being used and she never explained the side-benefit of succeeding in the item worlds.

I like what Hermione did and also Alfred Hitchcock for why she isnt a Claw. Nice work weaving that together. I think the easiest solution would be for Luna to transfigure her homework as underwear and when it goes missing claim academic sabotage.

this place seems like a hybrid of Diablo, Silent Hills, Narnia, and Resident Evil.

Is it weird that this chapter creeped me out even more than the Silent Hill nightmare/aberration?
it's just so inhumanly and insidious... so realistic and believable... maybe that's the hardest part to swallow, Xeno so blind and traditional that's so at odds with the image we had of him like an open and fun nuttier crackpot and the mechanical obsessive sick parents that although excessive does sound like an extreme of an example of reality, damn those hit like a bag of bricks

Bloody awesome story, thank you so much for sharing it!

Ding-dong-ditch, now with added cruelty. Just add flaming paper bags of dog do. No dogs? Well, you do have another source of do ::evil grin::

Well. Not bad. Not bad at all.
By the way, it's 5 am here, and I need to get at least a BIT of shut eyes today so that I can concentrate of finding out what disgea is.

Did they have to use the blood wolves, if they have such a psychological drawback? At least Harry.

A thought. When Snape delivered the prophecy to Voldemort, did he know who the potential targets would be? I'm not sure.

I don't really have a problem with the crossover, because for the most part you've done a good job of including enough of it for it to be coherent.

Why doesn't Harry want to use the sword of Griffindore as his weapon? Shouldn't he have the right, as one the one who drew it?

Many authors either bash Ginny off the bat, or make her a good girl all along.
Few mix it yo like this. I like how you did it.

We thank you the author for this piece of art called fan fic. I for one liked reading it