Fffffffffffuck. Yes. Just... nnnnn. I would not mind a meeting like this with someone. Shit. Talk about down and dirty. That was fucking hot.

o shingdi! i'm so lovin this fic!ya ganna make chap 3,or is that the end?oh and by the way!i loved all your fanfics i read every one of them but it's like1:17 and i gotda go to work at like3:30 so i don't have time to review on all but just imagen i did!(love your hands for this fic)-love -chu chi wanw

Okay I seriously dont get the mop and bucket reference! I can't fully grasp it help me! So is it over? I feel like the story just stopped, not even halfway through the storyline. It's too good to stop!

this...is so epic...;w;

love that smut~~ XD so sexy too~!

Damn! That was totally hot. I really loved it! The smut, the teases, and the oh so wonderful raging hormones. Please do continue it. Totally looking forward to the next chapter or sequel.

Wow! Almost halfway through I noticed that the wity banter between the two was going along with The Bad Touch! 3

KYAAAAA CAN I HUG YOU?

Sorry. But for serious, if i ever see you in real life and for some unexplainable reason know you are the person who wrote this fanfiction, I am totally glomping the shit out of you. Anyways, this is full of freaking WIN. Roxas having to do a degrading job like cleaning bathrooms is always worth a laugh, then sexy, flirty axel comes along (literally) and all this epic sex and llllluuuuuvvvvv~ they need to fall in love. I DONT FEEL LIKE ITS ACTUALLY OVER. psshhhha. fer srs. could you pretty please write up another chapter if you ever get insanely bored? because that would be epic if you did that :3. i know its like, over, but it doesn't feel like it. not that you made a mistake or anything, cuz this is like perfection.

*applause* YAY!

"I'll use your ass to start cleaning them off." Might make them more dirty so give him an enema and put him in a straitjacket first

A booze enema. That occurred to me later in the paragraph.

"Grind bind never mind." NICE!

Fuck Tifa and her stupid sappy romance and overly emotional breakups. YES! I love that. Also, dear gods those boys work for her? O.O

(Actually I wouldn't mind Tifa if my ex didn't like have a huge crush on her)

I love blankets on the walls. I did the same at my apartment, only I used sheets and tablecloths

Also reading this while listening to Backdoor Lover win.

Ooh. And more oohs. Your girlfriend sure us lucky to have you with her. I'd love to have some AkuRoku reading material everyday, for sure (:

cute story. it would be nice if there were a continuation in which demyx gets zexion.

*tosses you cookies* thanks for sharing

I feel like it's not over. My only complaint. Anyway, the lemons and writing were excellent. Very kinky! Great two-shot.

Loved the foreplay ) Awesome story and characterizations!

-EggPan

WHY IS THIS OVER?

i loved it so much ;A;

(can't wait for your next story!)

:D

mmm... purely delicious...