HOLY SHIT THERE'S MORE

Okay! This story was Very, Epically, Awesome! Excellent story and I loved every aspect of it. Yes, there was loss, but it was war. You did a fine job representing here. Thank you so much for finishing it, ever after you were considering it a chore.

Yeah . Epic.

Love Psycho-Naruto and Psycho-Sasuke. Lol.

I really loved this trilogy. WHAT A JOURNEY! I'm taking a few moments to accept that it has ended and I should move on with my life. It was such a clever story with so many characters which I'm not really fond of I prefer stories mainly of Naruto and Sasuke but GOD! you make me loved all of them, I laughed and cried so many times. So I'm going to take a few minutes to digest what a great story it was. You really are fantastic. Thank you.

Part Three of Massive Review

I adored Raiden and had somewhat of a mixed reaction to his sister. But I think she was probably the more realistic sibling in how someone (or anyone) that age would react to what she was going through.

Kushina I felt was pretty bitchy, but she was doing it out of tough love lol.

I'm glad that you redeemed Sasuke's mother in this. When it first started, I was kinda squeamish about her portrayal. It was done really well and probably a realistic reaction to her grief, but still hard to read. I wish she and her husband had gotten more couple time though. I think their relationship is one that gets overlooked and they both have the potential to be great characters. I"m glad to see that you made her a kickass genjutsu user _-.

One final note. I hadn't really watched much of Bleach, so I had to google some peeps. So you did a really good job describing their characters from the standpoint of someone who wasn't too familiar with them.

Lol I'd go into talking about how I liked or disliked various pairings, but I've probably rambled way too much as is. I'll leave shorter reviews on the other two.

Part Two (Had to be listed under chapter 66, because it won't let me review the same chapter twice)

Major Spoiler Alerts.

Sasukes/Narutos: I've always been a sucker for parallel universe/other versions of the characters. I'm impressed that you were able to make so many Sasuke/Naruto's, yet give them all such distinct personalities and relationships. I have to admit I felt horrible for Rasta Sasuke (apologies if I spelled that wrong). I think you really went out of your way to try to come up with the most horrible things possible to explain his story. You did a good job of this and I was happy about his "recovery" so to speak. My favorite Sasuke was definitely Queenie. I liked how he had his rambo moment and it was hilarious to see how the other Sasuke's reacted to him. Having a female Kyubbi was a stroke of comical genius.

I felt that Itachi was out of character, but at the same time in character. We never really got to see him interact with kids, other than Sasuke that I'm aware of. You had a really unique take on him. You could tell that he loved his 13 kids, but had trouble showing it like a "normal" person. Itachi being afraid of butterflies as a kid was hilarious.

Itachi's kids: I was overwhelmed at first by 13 of them. I was having trouble remembering who was who, what kid looked like what. But like I said you really gave them each their own personalities, and romances. backstories. They felt cannon by the end of it.

Some of the pairings I liked, some I was like why... would you stay with this person. But that's the mark of a good writer, to be able to leave an impression.

_ _ I kinda wish that Izuna had gotten his whirlwind romance. But Udon was such a dedicated husband, that it makes sense. I"m surprised that Izuna would be so lovestruck that he didn't consider what effect bringing back a descendant might have have had on the timeline. I thought that he was too cold about the baby. But it made sense from a survivalist standpoint.

I really liked what you did with the alien world and the insects.

The Gods/Goddess elements were epic.

Chibi Gaara was hilarious. There were honestly times in this series, I hated regular Gaara. Which says something as he's one of my favorite characters. But by the end he was redeemed.

Part One of Massive Review

I read in your profile that you are busy working on an original novel. Good luck with that. I just wanted to let you know that I've spent almost the past week reading this amazing trilogy.

It's truly massive. It was really original and I"ve never really seen a fanfiction that blended four shows (Naruto, Bleach, Charmed, and Buffy the Vampire Slayer) so well. I really liked how despite how many characters there were, that most of them were given plenty of screen time. The OC's by the end of it felt like cannon characters. Between these three works, you probably broke over a million works, that's an epic saga. I'm amazed that you managed to finish it. It must have taken a lot of will power to do so.

This is going to take more than one review to do, because otherwise it'd get way too long lol. Please bare with me. :)

Two years later and the ending has yet to loose its tear jerking feels. If only time can heal all wounds...

Finally! And "so where's the spin offs?" Lol! This was a journey and a half. Most authors on fanfics don't stick with a story for as long as you did and the fact that you did...man. That's fucking impressive. I absolutely loved this storyline from beginning to ending. There were some hard parts to read but the good *wiggles eyebrows*. So sad about Ibiki and Akane! They'd have surely made some psycho future Ankos (at least that's how I feel for some unexplainable reason) I don't mind the loss of Itachi...The way he and Gaara understood each other was amazing. Anyway I'm done will check and pray that there's another story to end this all.. If not it was an amazing journey. Kudos to you and your awesomeness!

This is really quite confusing for me, to think this story is over is crazy that I haven't fully processed it. So many things happened since the last time I reviewed but it's really weird you left an opening for another story but at the same time you finished this trilogy and rapped all the loose ends. There's a couple things I need to address though first one being how long the battle was, I like action but my mind sucks at imagining stuff so I did slow down and got confused at times, however I was strangely reminded of the pein fight in the actual show when everyone was revived so that was nice. Secondly raiden, I love that he loves his sister yet not to that extent it weird for me to say that but I just don't like that or the fact he wasn't the strongest. However, him and Wyatt being bonded really just made my life better. Haha. Then really everything was finished except the Aimi thing. Just the fact she was the strongest didn't really sit well with me, I never really liked Aimi much and towards the end I was starting to feel...something but right now all I really want is for her to survive cause I'm a sucker for happy endings so I'm guessing she survives and goes to Konoha? Finally can I just make one point about the ita/gaa thing, I think that separation hurt me more than I thought it would, willow and them was never a thing I liked and I thought them together was perfect and to see it end like that was really sad. I'm really glad I read this trilogy I again thank you for writing cause you have a talent :)

Before I get to the final training I want to review again right now. There's so many things that happened that I couldn't even explain. Although you focused less on relationships and focused on the way your trained them. All I can say is wow It was grueling. Many times I was mad that the kids were put to danger and never told the adults but sadly most of it has left my mind due to recent chapters. I will however point out the things I loved! Yo-chan and lee..the cutest thing ever. Hiroko and queenie's relationship and Hiroko being pregnant. Yes! Kaito being a daddy and the different narutos and sasuke's that really made the chapters from 22-52 worth it. I'm so happy kenpachi and Aimi are sort of done for now and Aimi knows what she's suppose to do, I like how she's frightened at times and not always stoic and not scared of anything. Wyatt and raiden were what really had me crying, not exaggerating. I want them back together but also I want raiden to appreciate Wyatt like he deserves. I'm really excited for the fight but I really want it to be over soon. I want some family time! I can't wait to read the rest and see the pregnant yoai couples. Im so excited love your story so much. Till next time.

-Review for the first part of this story-
I just wanted to say that I really love your story. Even when you add some angsty bits I can rely on you bringing everything together for a happy ending. This first part had so many things I loved however it felt like you were trying to find partners for everyone (which is a lot since there's so many kids.) I really always agree with most of your decisions and you have a way to make me not stop reading even if I disagree with something. I loved the fact that sasuke and Naruto are disciplining their kids, don't get me wrong if they were normal I wouldn't allow the harsh treatment but with really strong kids they need a strong punishment so YES! GO DADDY NARUTO AND SASUKE 3 I love Wyatt and raidan so much. They are so cute I can't even. The only two things right now I feel that I don't really like is the fact that bleach characters came in and found someone already but I'm quickly getting over it because the yoai pairing with Kenta is so hot ;) The second thing would have to be the Aimi/kenpachi relationship because no matter how I look at that it is not okay she's a child of 10 getting called "his women" umm no. I can barley handle Ibiki and Akane I really don't want to think about Aimi getting into that with kenpachi who's possibly over 1,000 years old in bleach age which would still be older than Ibiki if put into Naruto ages, I don't know if you made them into an actual pairing but I hope not. Other than that your story is AMAZING and I can't wait for some action with the bijuus. I can't wait to read part 2 and review that :3

For the life of me I cannot remember if I have ever thanked you for this story, but if I have not, please forgive me and accept my sincere thanks and appreciation for your sharing of this story. If I have already done so, then please accept my sincere thanks and appreciation once more. If I did not clear my inbox right after reading messages then I would not be in this predicament, but I do, so here I am. Moving on...

I must say that the bond shared between Raiden and Aimi just touched my heart and had me in tears. The love they have for each other and each being so uniquely powerful and the fact that both humans and deities were after their power. Then came the reveal that the whole war was a manipulation and a power play from the start (screams)! Then came the heartbreak when Aimi was about to reverse time and she said that she might never see Raiden again - waterfalls - the tears they were a falling - even more so than when she actually died. My eyes are watering now just thinking about it, so I will move on to happier thoughts.

Ikkaku and Akiko - good lord they were my favorite couple! I always wore the biggest smile whenever I would read a scene with those two. The way she all innocently thought he just wanted to train with her and then the way she fought him after he chased her and held her and his reaction to her screams and punches. His line "what in god's name is wrong with you woman" had me rolling. The scenes with those two always had me smiling - well until the scene where she wouldn't tell him that he had her love (I mean was it too much to ask. He just wanted to go to his grave knowing he had her love...Geez Louise) and the scene where she died in his arms...yeah, that was a bummer... but I was smiling again when in the end after all that hell on earth, they were still together. Ikkaku was all Jennifer Holliday "And I Am Telling You I'm Not Going"! Those two never failed to have me cracking up! Even now as I think about those two, I am grinning from ear to ear!

Byakuya and Kenpachi - you know I always thought if those two were ever alone in a dark alley something hot and heavy would go down between them. I always looked at them with a side eye since I first saw them together in Bleach. The way Kenpachi kept goading him about Rukia's pending execution and the ways of the nobles made me suspect there was some sexual tension brewing between those two. The way you wrote their sex scenes made me believe that if shit were to go down between those two it would happen in a similar fashion with Kenpachi goading Byakuya into it. I do believe that Byakuya would seek him out afterwards for more of the same - even though he would never admit it.

Asami and Hitsugaya - The horror that happened to Asami is something I would not wish even on my worst enemy. What I would wish on my worst enemy is unprepped anal with a flagpole, but that is neither here nor there. The fact that she was able to move on and open up her heart to a guy is incredible. I know rape victims that never reach that point. Some retreat so far into themselves and from life, but there are some that overcome it - not fully, but enough to no longer hide from life. Asami choosing Hitsugaya struck me as logical because he is not frightening or dominating in appearance. I believe that had she not been raped at such a young age, someone that looked like him might have been the object of her first crush. Hitsugaya is cute, I can't fault the girl for that. I am glad that she was able to find love and welcome it into her life. I am glad that he was able to do the same. Those two are so sweet and so adorable together. I do wonder what Matsumoto's reaction to her would have been though, oh bump that, what would Asami's reaction to Matsumoto have been! Oh dear lord, Matsumoto would have to look for another lieutenant position in another squad because Asami would be having none of that!

Minato and Kushina - I don't know why it is that I cannot get into couples that are canon, but I just cannot. Minato and Kushina are the one exception. They are so opposite in personality. He is devilishly handsome and intelligent. She is loud and feisty and their passion is just red hot! I admit when she first arrived, I. Did. Not. Like. Her. That is the one thing Rasta-Sasuke and I had in common. All I could say was what is this bitch's problem? She came with such a chip on her shoulder, but then I understood her anger given the urgency of the situation. She warmed on me when I saw how deeply she cared for Blondie and the risk she undertook to bring him back from his psychotic break. On a side note, Chibi-Gaara trying to get in Kushina's pants was priceless! Then when all the teachers were going home and he took advantage of the situation and put his face in her breasts and Minato pulled him away by the hair and kicked him - I died! I could not stop laughing and in fact I am laughing now!

Naruto and Sasuke - Well this whole thing started with them so I guess I should end with them. When I was reading this story in the beginning chapters and I saw how broken Sasuke was, I was like oh shit, this won't end well. Then when he left and told the kids good-bye (that was a heartbreaking scene) only to come back and kiss Neji (shrieks!) and then proceed to tell Naruto to get out because he loves him too much and doesn't have an identity without him only to have Naruto proceed to say oh hell no I ain't going nowhere and neither are you. I think anyone who has loved someone with all their being only to have the object of that affection stay gone for 20 hours out of a 24 hour day could understand Sasuke's pain. At the same time I can understand the person that is gone the 20 hours out of a 24 hour day in order to provide for their family, not recognizing the toll their absence has taken on the family. I understood both sides. I applaud Naruto for not giving up and just walking out on his family. He took action and got things back on track. What I find interesting is his jealousy where Sasuke is concerned. It is not like during the years they were together that Sasuke cheated on him or flirted with every Tom, Dick and Harry that came his way or gave Naruto any cause to be jealous (not that I can remember anyway). His jealousy just seemed unjustified. Now Sasuke has plenty of reason to be jealous because Naruto (if I understand correctly) likes guys and girls and has even stated that Hana and Hinata are hot, so yeah, the raven haired beauty has cause, but Naruto? Nah, I just don't see it. Well, you know, aside from Neji. (please don't get me started on the hotness that is Hyuuga Neji). Anyway, leaving that subject, my heart went out to them at the loss of Aimi (dang, tears are forming again). I know she's alive and Kenpachi brought her back (that SOB does not play, damn it) but if I read the story right, they don't know she's alive. I imagine they will not let her so much as cross the street without one of them being with her when do reunite with her. All I know is that Naruto and Sasuke have proven that time and time again they will live and die for each other. And then do it again - with feeling. Yes, I know that made no sense. That happens with me on occasion.

I apologize for this long ass review. There is more I could say and want to say, but I will not waste any more of your time. I just had to let you know how much I appreciate the time and effort you put into this story. Once I started reading it, I hated having to stop reading it. Interruptions were not welcomed by any stretch of the imagination. I was glad I was able to finish it and I enjoyed it all the way to the end. So once again, I thank you and wish you all the best. As always I hope this finds you in the best of health and in the best of spirits. XOXO - Leila

Awwww Blondie :3 So glad that their story continues here in TTB. It's wonderful! I have to say I didn't enjoy Until You as much as I should, but their characters work in this fic :)