This is a really good story. I really like it

AH! THIS WAS AMAZING! YAY! only critsim is the progressive voice of this... but that may just be my problem. It's your story you can do what you want. But oh my good golly goodness you write Ernst SO PERFECTLY! and Hanschen as well.

HOT. :D Hehe, this was pretty darn good for a first fic, love. I'm being a hypocrite here, but just be sure to double-check your spelling/punctuation.

Anyway, yeah, this made me giggle. I can't wait to read more from you.

I like it! Very much. Write more! I want to read it. And please do the lemon more! This story is mouthwatering...

BTW: You perhaps should allow anonymus reviews?

Heh. Innocent Ernst is just so completely adorable!

So far, good stuff. I look forward to more from you!