This is another super story you have here. This would be a nice one to continue too...but Drastic Holiday is sooo great that I hope you will go on with it soon. Thank you for writing these wonderful stories.

This seems pretty much right with the manga...except in the battle Hinata is there fighting right next to Naruto and protecting him too. Love it!

This was really good.

Omnomnom-naruto-omnom. :D

*chuckles* I love that ending schenario. Ten points for the creative review poem! Have a lolcat!

For the fic: I could see how this was in a way part of Drastic Holiday in a way, and completely separate in another. It almost felt like an offshoot as I read it, and idea that could have been DH if canon hadn't been tweaked lovingly to preserve our Ero-sannin. Looking at it with a tilted head, I can't really say which possibility I like best, honestly; both ideas are explored very well, and the characterisation is very well worked on. You were careful to keep to canon characterisation in this one (Delirium!Naruto was _fun_!), while in DH, you gave the canon characterisations a credible polish-over, accounting for the extra four years. I love how you gave Naruto a little bit of an abandoned complex here, in his fear of Hinata doing a disappearing act, and how you pointed out that Jiraiya rarely teaches Naruto anything, rather leaving him to fend for himself ... wonder if he'll have to swallow his words with Hinata :D

Thanks for these fics, I really enjoyed them! I don't think I've been this wordy for anyone in this fandom yet, so sorry if I burried you in alphabeth X'D

You are absolutely amazing. I have been searching and searching for something even remotely decent enough to read and then I stumble on to this and I cannot get enough. Finally! I wish I posessed your unique writing skills so I could expound on how utterly AWESOME you are. Please do not abandon us! I am a 32 year old Naruto fan who neds this!

short but still cool, im not the kind of writting reviews for all the chapters/fics i read, but this one is quite good for me to leave a review, keep the good work on!

nice

Wonderful story.

Awesome. Just...you have a terrific writing style, and your stories are quite addictive. And seriously, Naruto's delirious rant was making me laugh, especially the part about Sasuke.

And the ending is so sweet!

I really like this. The writing, the speech...the irony of Naruto wanting to smile like that. This is great.

D'aww... lol... I'm such a sap, but this chapter was insanely cute, even if short. Thanks for sharing, and it's kinda a shame you won't be expanding anymore on this story, but I guess it's fine the way it is. I feel it needs more but it doesn't really need more, if it makes any sense.

Maybe it's just 'cause you rock at writing NaruHina _

This is an Excellent story in my opinion. I really enjoyed the second chapter.

Lol I love delirious Naruto

I have to say again, awesome! I loved how in For a scond its from Naruto's point of view, and for Every Second its Hinata's :)

I'm adding this to my favorites :3

Brita

Aww! This was awesome.

And lol, Naruto&Kiba swear like crazy.