Reviews for Into the Open
Team Peeta Mellark chapter 1 . 3/2/2019
This story is so cute! I love Edward and Jasper as a couple! :)
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 12/17/2016
Those beginning moments of discovering each other were so delicious. You described that first tingle so well! Thanks for yet Another great one-shot!
Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 8/31/2016
That was very sweet, smexy cute story of boy love I loved it
TMIobsessor chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
Awwww
zairre chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
oh, so sweet
XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Perfect! Though part of me craves an epilogue.
LyRiCho chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Incredible! Its like a true story of a real person! Awww its sooo beautiful!... To realize something you didn't know you wanted and craved for and feeling that pain when you hurt the someone you love but don't know you love yet? T.T so sweet! XD
HeatherAbdelrahman chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
WOW! THIS was ur FIRST slash? Seriously? um.. I'm a thinking that you should definately continue writing slash! HOTTt as hell and beautiful all at the same time. LOVE it!
aStubbornRose chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Great story!
simba5waldo5 chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
well dammit I feel stupid. but I still love this story. I hope this gave you a good laugh. It did me. I hope you won! melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I just found your short story and it is wonderful. I love how they met in college and edward just found himself, sexually. I can totally understand him not wanting the guys to know, and how hurt jasper was. I am glad they worked everything out. great job. I am going to read the next chapter. this was really, really good. melissa
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Great first slash story!
Lostred Rose J chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Just one word...BEAUTIFULL!
Snappher chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Wow! Edward gets the Big Brass Balls Award for bold outings! dayum! "Hi, suitemates, here we are, naked and gay as newborns!" :) lol...that'll learn 'em. :)

I am SO glad that Edward came to terms with his feelings for Jasper...it would suck for him to want to remain closeted and clandestine forever! Not to mention, it would break Jasper's heart, and give tell him that gay wasn't OK with Edward.

Vive le Slash! :)))))

ps: please tell Edward not to get hung up on labels. Gay, straight, bi - what's it really matter? Ya love who you love, and to hell with any asshole who has a problem with it. :)
flutterfli chapter 2 . 7/19/2011
Just found this and can I just say "WOW!" Aand did you really fool me, I was excited to see how they were accepted and I got a reminder for the contest. LMBO. Any chance of continuing? These two are cute together...
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