Such a sad little story of missing love. Well written and flowing

This was beautifully written! I always liked the idea of Paris an unrequited lovef or Rory, despite how much I enjoyed seeing her and Doyle together on the show. Using hands as a vehicle to display this love was a great idea. Every part of this is framed perfectly.

I just found this story. It was so beautiful! Thank you for sharing.

I just found this and I really loved it. It was really well written and emotional. Great Job.

This was awesome! Very well written. Not really femslash between Paris and Rory which is great because I don't typically like femslash.

"I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul."

This story has only gotten TWO review? That is insane! Your story is so fantastic, so realistic, so true to the show, and so painfully beautiful that it is an absolute shame that you've only gotten two reviews.

Maybe the idea of unrequited love is too sad a thought, so stories like your are avoided in an effort for potential readers to avoid any feelings of angst or heartache, but I think stories like this are just important to read as stories with "happy endings."

Anyway... this story is absolutely beautiful. Paris' thoughts and feelings are so in character, and I absolutely love how she analyzes the hands of those she has feelings for. I love her daydreams, and how when Doyle fumbles over her clothes, she bites back a sigh and thinks of Rory. And even though the ending is sad, I love that she forces herself to suffocate her feelings for Rory and her hands (it's almost as is her feelings for Rory are personified by her love of Rory's hands...?)

Thanks for sharing this story with us! I hope you keep writing.

That was beautiful and full of angst. I loved your way with words.

This is really beautiful. I like the idea of unrequited Paris/Rory; it seems plausible to me.