I Know I am 4 years late but I hope u come back and continue this wonderful story. I'm kinda curious to what happened to Naruto's curse mark? Did it disappear when he "died"? Cheers

Wouldn’t 9 tails take away orochimaru curse mark

Minato’s reason for wanting to do the seal was pretty dumb but there are a lot of things like that in canon, too so it’s not that serious

No more Jiraya abuse :'(

I like this fanfic quite much and look forward for its continuation.

LOL AMAZING LMFAO

i'm not the type to comment on every fanfic, but this chapter begging me to comment on it, I already lost interest after i read the last chapter and now you made naruto more edgy and emo because of curse mark.
PPPFFFFTTTT!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...

goodby then,

You Plan All the Training Naruto Did and FOR WHAATTT!... For him to failed saved Sasuke from cursed mark and get marked for himself also... I SAY BULLSHITT ON THAT... ALL THAT CHARACTER BUILDING FOR NOTHING...it's just like canon except you make it more glorious and nothing more.

sad you abandonded such a story

I like how you used actual legends and stories about muramasa, great job

You should have a beta or proofreader go through atleast some of your early chapters. I’m not too far in but reading chapter 6 there’s quite a few easy grammatical errors. Easy to fix and not a huge deal but it does definitely take away from the immersion in the story. For instance in one sentence you use “at this time” like 4 times. Repeating the same words is a bit.. mmm.. how to put it. Annoying? Not like it makes me hate the story but I have to pause to roll my eyes and try to fit better words myself to be able to keep reading. “DODGE” shouted Tsuande has she thre a massive dodge ball at Naruto who barely dodge it. Instead you could change some of the words and it’d flow a lot better. I’m not a writer but like this maybe “DODGE” shouted Tsunade as she hurls a massive ball towards Naruto who manages to make it miss by a hair. On top of fixing all the spelling and grammatical errors this allows someone to not constantly read the same word and gives you a bit more flair to your writing style! Other then that love the story idea and just hoping the writing gets a tad bit better!

author-san please come back..

you know it's funny that people like to criticize someone's story so harshly when they haven't written one themselves... you have done so have probably made the author not want to write this story anymore. good for you but your selfishness has caused the ones who enjoyed this story to suffer. I hope each and everyone of you experience the same pain when stories you like get abandoned

hey bro come back if you can this story is good

The DRAGON BALL reference