I really hope that ou haven't abandoned this fic. It's a great start to what sounds to be an entertaining story. So please if our still around post the next chapter.

I would love to see the next chapter of this story! I cannot see where it will end, and from what I've read, it sounds *very* interesting!

I'd love to see a second chapter of this...the only critique that I would give is a couple minor spelling errors... But that's all :D

This was good actually i feel like a pevert. but there needs to be rape in this detailed rape maybe even crossdressing ohh ohh ohhh~

It's good, please continue !

hmm.. very interesting. I am attracted to this fic. will there be a second chapter?

Your fic is a little more than O.K. I must admit that I can not see where this is going. Surprisingly, I have no criticism. That simply means this fic is neither good nor bad.